Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve tense accuracy, expand content, and make your answer natural. Begin with a clear topic sentence in past tense ("No, I didn't"), then briefly explain why or give a short detail. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences) and use linking words if you add reasons.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment and there wasn't space to store one. However, I often borrowed bikes from friends to ride in the park on weekends.

제안: Provide a direct opinion with reasons and at least one supporting detail. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "however", "for example") and specific examples to make your answer convincing. Keep responses natural and limited to a few sentences.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for commuting due to long distances and limited bike lanes. For example, in my city there are few dedicated cycling paths, so cycling is mostly a weekend activity rather than a daily transport option.

× No, I don't have one.

✓ No, I didn't have one.

The question uses past tense 'Did you have', so the student's answer should also be in past tense. Using 'do/does' indicates present tense and is inconsistent. Suggestion: use past simple 'didn't have' to match the question's tense.'

× No, I don't think so.

✓ No, I don't think they are.

The examiner asks about the current popularity of bikes ('Do you think bikes are popular...'), so a present-tense response is appropriate. The student's original sentence 'No, I don't think so' is informal and vague; it lacks a clear reference to 'bikes' and 'popular'. A clearer correction keeps present tense and explicitly refers to 'they are' (bikes are popular). Suggestion: say 'No, I don't think they are' or 'No, I don't think bikes are popular.'