Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct, complete sentence that answers the question, then add one brief supporting detail using linking words. Be specific about which bike(s) you had, when you used them, and why you remember them. Keep it to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small black bicycle with green and white stickers, and I used it to ride to school and play with friends. Because it was lightweight, I learned to ride confidently by the age of seven.

제안: Answer directly then give a reason and an example using linking words to make the reply natural and informative. Mention who uses bikes, for what purposes, and a brief comparison or statistic if possible. Keep it concise and avoid repeating words.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and short trips. For example, in cities many office workers and students ride bicycles to avoid traffic, and in rural areas they are a cheap, convenient way to travel.

× Black, green, white when I was a child.

✓ I had a black, a green, and a white bike when I was a child.

The original reply is a fragment lacking a main verb and clear subjects; it lists colors only. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Provide a complete sentence with subject and verb to answer the examiner's question. Also add articles to clarify that these are bikes and use commas and 'and' to join items. Suggested improvement: Always include a subject and verb (e.g., I had...) and use proper list punctuation and articles when listing items.

× Yes, the bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

Using the definite article 'the' before a general plural noun here is unnecessary and can imply specific bikes rather than bikes in general; this is an article error (ID 22). Remove 'the' when talking about things in general. Suggested improvement: For general statements about a category, use the plural noun without an article (e.g., 'Bikes are popular...').