Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details using a linking word. Avoid awkward phrasing like “as long as I remember” and repetitive words.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike with training wheels, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend. Because my parents lived nearby, I often practiced with my older cousin until I felt confident.

제안: Be more direct and correct grammar. Use clear linking words and give a specific reason or example. Avoid filler phrases such as “well, actually” and the awkward insertion “more like popular.” Also fix plural/singular errors ("country").

예시: No, I don't think bikes are very popular anymore because many people prefer electric scooters for short trips. For example, in my city you can see rows of rental scooters everywhere, and they are cheaper and more convenient for commuting.

× As long as I remember when I was a child, I did have a bike.

✓ As far as I can remember from my childhood, I had a bike.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and a tense/form issue. 'As long as I remember when I was a child' is incorrect; the common phrase is 'As far as I can remember' and 'from my childhood' clarifies the time. 'Did have' is unnecessary emphatic past; simple past 'had' is correct. Suggest using 'As far as I can remember from my childhood, I had a bike.' for natural, grammatically correct English.

× Well, actually I would say no, because I think that scooters are more like popular in my countries nowadays.

✓ Well, actually I would say no, because I think scooters are more popular in my country nowadays.

There are multiple issues: 'countries' should be singular 'country' to match the speaker; this is a singular/plural error. 'More like popular' is ungrammatical—use comparative 'more popular' without 'like'. Remove 'that' after 'think' for smoother speech. Also unnecessary 'would' can remain for politeness, but core correction fixes plural and comparative usage. Suggest: 'Well, actually I would say no, because I think scooters are more popular in my country nowadays.'