Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. For Part 1 you should answer directly with a clear topic sentence and 1–2 supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). For example, state whether you had a bike, mention when or what type, and add one brief memory or reason why it was important to you. Use linking words like “and” or “so” if you add details.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was about seven years old. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I rode it every day after school. I remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without the training wheels, so I spent weekends practicing with my friends.

제안: Your answer gives an opinion but is unclear and contains grammar mistakes. To improve, give a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then add one specific supporting detail or example. Use correct verb forms and clear nouns. Avoid vague abbreviations like “UMM” unless explained. Use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, students and workers often cycle to school or the office to avoid traffic, and some cities have bike lanes to make cycling safer.

× Yes, I think because people are usually use bike for UMM.

✓ Yes, I think so because people usually use bikes for commuting.

The sentence has multiple issues falling under third person singular and singular/plural use. 'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'use' (which is correct) but the original included an extra 'are' making 'are usually use' which is ungrammatical; this is a verb form error (Third person singular/auxiliary misuse). Also 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to match 'people' (plural). 'for UMM' is unclear and likely intended to be 'for commuting' or 'to commute'; use the noun 'commuting' or the infinitive 'to commute'. The corrected sentence uses 'so' after 'I think' for naturalness, removes the incorrect auxiliary 'are', makes 'bikes' plural to agree with 'people', and replaces 'for UMM' with 'for commuting'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary auxiliary verbs, ensure subject-verb agreement, match noun number to the subject, and use clear vocabulary for 'commuting.'