Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap anlaşılır değil ve soruya uygun değil. Öncelikle doğrudan konu cümlesiyle başlayın (Evet/Hayır ve kısa açıklama). Ardından bisikletten bahseden somut detaylar ekleyin (kim verdi, ne sıklıkla kullandınız, nerede sürdünüz). Bağlaçlar (because, so, and) kullanarak cümleleri mantıksal olarak bağlayın. Cümle sayısını 3-4 ile sınırlayın ve gereksiz kelimelerden kaçının.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me on my seventh birthday, and I used it to ride to the park almost every day. Because it was a small red bike, I felt very proud and confident while cycling with my friends.

제안: Cevap kısmen ilgili fakat dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi hatalı. "Box" yerine "bike" kullanılmalı. Doğrudan görüşünüzü belirtin, sonra nedenlerini iki veya üç net nedenle destekleyin. Bağlaçlar (because, since, therefore) ve örnekler kullanarak açıklamayı güçlendirin. Cümleleri sade ve akıcı tutun (maksimum 4 cümle).

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars and motorcycles for convenience. For example, long distances and hot weather make cycling uncomfortable for commuters. Therefore, only some students and hobby cyclists use bikes in cities.

× Those you can be obligated more meat.

✓ I think you can be encouraged to eat more meat.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and unclear meaning. It uses 'Those you can be obligated more meat' which is not grammatically coherent. The intended idea seems to be giving a suggestion about encouraging someone to eat more meat. Change 'Those' to 'I think' to introduce an opinion, replace 'you can be obligated' with 'you can be encouraged' (a correct verb + passive structure), and add 'to eat' before 'more meat' to complete the verb phrase. Use 'obligated' only when someone is forced; 'encouraged' fits better for suggestion contexts. Keep verb forms consistent and include the infinitive 'to' after 'encouraged'.

× No, uh, the box is not popular in my country because uh, our people, umm, driving car and motorcycle.

✓ No, bikes are not popular in my country because people drive cars and ride motorcycles.

The original sentence uses 'the box' which is a noun error (probably a mispronunciation of 'bikes') and lacks proper verb forms: 'our people, umm, driving car and motorcycle' should be a complete clause with finite verbs. Replace 'the box' with 'bikes' to refer to the subject, use plural 'cars' and 'motorcycles', and use correct verbs: 'drive cars' and 'ride motorcycles'. Also remove unnecessary filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and parallel structure ('drive cars and ride motorcycles').