Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Respond directly to the question with a clear statement about your own experience (topic sentence), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating the examiner's question. Keep the answer natural and within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I rode it every day after school. Because it had training wheels at first, I learned to ride more confidently, and by the time I was nine I could ride around the whole neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Give a direct opinion then support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, therefore, also). Add one or two concrete details about where or who uses bikes to make the answer more informative and natural.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for commuting because traffic is heavy and bike lanes are common, and students often cycle to school to save money and time.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeated the examiner's question instead of providing an answer. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because the response lacks the expected main verb and subject that affirmatively answer the past-tense question. Correct form uses past simple 'had' to match the question's past tense and includes a subject 'I' and auxiliary information. Suggestion: when answering Yes/No past questions, use 'Yes, I' + past-tense verb (e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.') or 'No, I didn't.'

× I think they are very popular.

✓ I think bicycles are very popular in my country.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable, but 'they' is vague and could confuse the listener. This relates to incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and a present tense statement (ID 6). Replacing 'they' with a clear noun 'bicycles' clarifies meaning and keeps present tense 'are' appropriate. Suggestion: use a clear noun instead of a pronoun when the referent might be ambiguous, and include 'in my country' to directly answer the examiner's question about locality.