Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and naturalness. Give a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms, and concise supporting detail. Use linking words only if adding explanation. Be specific about reasons and limit to maximum 5 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I preferred walking because my family lived nearby and we could get everywhere on foot. Also, my parents didn’t think a bike was necessary for a small child, so I learned to walk everywhere instead.

제안: Make the answer more coherent and accurate. Start with a clear opinion, then add two specific supporting reasons with linking words (for example, 'because' and 'also'). Use appropriate vocabulary (transport, sport, commuting) and avoid filler phrases.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country. Mainly people use them for sport and leisure, but many also use bikes for short-distance transport because they are convenient and inexpensive. For example, students and office workers often cycle to nearby schools or offices to avoid traffic.

× No, because I really hate to.

✓ No, because I really hate it.

The original uses 'hate to' without an object or following verb, which is unnatural here. The speaker means they dislike the activity in general, so 'hate it' or 'hate riding bikes' is correct. Suggest replacing with 'hate it' or 'hate riding bikes' to clarify meaning and use appropriate object after 'hate'.

× I just when I was a kid I just moved by my feet.

✓ When I was a kid I used to walk everywhere.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and an odd verb phrase 'moved by my feet'. Use 'When I was a kid' at the start, and express habitual past with 'used to' or 'walked'. 'Moved by my feet' is nonstandard; 'walked' or 'went on foot' are natural alternatives.

× Yes, I think it's the usually you, it's just for the sport, but not just for the transport.

✓ Yes, I think it's usually for sport, not for transport.

The phrase 'the usually you' is ungrammatical and pronoun use is incorrect. Remove extraneous pronouns and articles: 'usually' is an adverb modifying 'for sport'. Also 'for the sport' and 'for the transport' should be simplified to 'for sport' and 'for transport' or 'for transportation'. This produces clear, natural English.

× And I think that because it's really convenient and it doesn't cost a lot.

✓ I think that because it's really convenient and doesn't cost a lot.

The sentence uses an extra 'it' before 'doesn't cost a lot' which is unnecessary but not strictly wrong; removing it makes the sentence more natural. Also consider more natural phrasing: 'it doesn't cost much' or 'it isn't expensive'.