Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise, and slightly expanded with one brief supporting detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then add a reason or short example using a linking word. Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bicycle when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family lived nearby. As a result, I didn’t learn to ride until I was a teenager.

제안: Answer directly and use correct grammar and linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence (present simple), then give one or two specific reasons or examples, using linking words like "because" or "for example." Avoid informal contractions like "'cause."

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for exercise and short commutes. For example, city parks are full of cyclists in the mornings, and some companies provide bike-sharing schemes for employees.

× No, I don't have any bicycle when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bicycle when I was a child.

Errors: 'don't have' is present tense while the time frame 'when I was a child' is past, so past tense 'didn't have' is required (Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue). Also 'any bicycle' is incorrect; use 'a bicycle' after a negative with a specific countable noun or 'any bicycles' for plural (Grammar Problem Type ID 1: Singular and plural issue and ID 22: Article errors). Suggestion: Use past tense 'didn't have' and the correct article 'a' for one countable item: 'No, I didn't have a bicycle when I was a child.'

× Yes, it's popular in my country 'cause if they use when they exercise.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because people use them when they exercise.

Errors: 'it's' (it is) mismatches the plural subject 'bikes' so use 'bikes are' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27: Subject-verb agreement and ID 2: Third person singular issue). The clause 'cause if they use when they exercise' is ungrammatical: 'if' is unnecessary and omits the object of 'use'; better: 'because people use them when they exercise' (Grammar Problem Type ID 16: Incorrect conjunction use and ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions/structure). Also replace informal ''cause' with 'because' for formal correctness. Suggestion: State the general fact in present simple and use a clear reason clause: 'Yes, bikes are popular in my country because people use them when they exercise.'