Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Give a direct yes/no or short topic sentence first, then one or two clear supporting details. Use correct tense (past) and simple vocabulary. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words if adding details (for example, 'because', 'so', 'but'). Be specific about why you did or did not have a bike (safety, roads, family, etc.).

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. The roads near my home were busy and not safe for children, so my parents didn't allow me to ride. As a result, I usually walked or took public transport to go to school.

제안: Your answer is confused and hard to follow. Start with a clear opinion (Yes/No and why). Use linking words like 'however' or 'because' to connect ideas. Mention specific reasons (traffic, public transport, bike lanes), and give one concrete example. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'popular', 'traffic', 'public transport', 'bike lanes'). Keep it concise (max five sentences).

예시: Bikes are not very popular in Bangkok compared with other cities. Because the city has heavy traffic and few safe bike lanes, many people prefer motorbikes or public transport. However, cycling is growing in some areas recently because of new bike lanes and interest in exercise.

× When I watch you at the bicycle by yourself because the environment not convenient for a practice bicycle and the area is traffic.

✓ When I was a child I did not ride a bicycle by myself because the environment was not convenient for practicing and the area had a lot of traffic.

The original sentence has multiple structure and verb-tense issues: incorrect verb 'watch' instead of 'was' or 'did' (sentence should describe past situation), missing auxiliary and negation, incorrect noun phrases ('practice bicycle'), and awkward clause order. This matches 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). Suggestion: break into a clear past-tense main clause and reason clause, use past simple ('was', 'did not ride', 'was not convenient', 'had a lot of traffic'), use 'practicing' rather than 'practice bicycle', and place clauses in logical order.

× I think that's the risk core popular in my country, Bangkok, the capital city of Thailand and the con the transportation is convenient and for example, the bars and the bride in a popular in the some people.

✓ I think bicycles are popular in my country, especially in Bangkok, the capital city of Thailand, because transportation is convenient. For example, many people use bikes to get around and for short trips.

The original sentence contains incorrect pronoun/reference and many other errors; the main issue is unclear subject reference and wrong words ('that's the risk core', 'the bride', 'in the some people'). This fits 'Incorrect use of pronouns' (ID 12) and also sentence structure problems. I corrected the subject to 'bicycles' to match the question about bikes, clarified 'especially in Bangkok', explained the reason with 'because transportation is convenient' and provided a clear example. Suggestion: use clear noun subjects, avoid vague pronouns, and choose accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'many people', 'use bikes', 'short trips').