Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, correct grammar, and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence. Avoid repetition and fix mistakes (e.g. 'back' → 'bike'). Add one or two specific supporting details connected with linking words. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bright red bike with a popular design, and I loved it. Because it had training wheels, I learned to ride quickly and used it every day to visit friends and play in the park.

제안: Start with a clear direct answer, then give specific reasons and examples using linking words. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g. 'young generation' → 'young people', 'communicate by bikes' → 'commute by bike'). Avoid trailing off; finish your thought.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many young people use bicycles to commute to university or work because they are cheaper and faster in traffic. In addition, some cities have good bike lanes, so more professionals choose cycling as a healthy and practical option.

× When I was a child my parents bought me a fantastic bike which has the most popular design, so I'm very delighted.

✓ When I was a child my parents bought me a fantastic bike which had the most popular design, so I was very delighted.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses. The main event (parents bought me a bike) happened in the past, so descriptions and feelings tied to that past event should use past tense (had, was). Use consistent past tense to maintain clear timeline. Suggestion: keep verbs describing the same time frame in past tense (bought, had, was).

× I was very delighted about having a back.

✓ I was very delighted to have it.

The original sentence likely intends to say the student was happy to have the bike, but 'having a back' is ungrammatical and probably a typo. Also 'delighted about having' is awkward; 'delighted to have' is more natural. Suggestion: replace the phrase with 'delighted to have it' or 'delighted to have the bike.'

× Yes, definitely many young generation prefer riding a bike, riding bikes to travel around the city, and even some young professionals also like to communicate by bikes because they think.

✓ Yes, definitely many young people prefer riding bikes to travel around the city, and even some young professionals also like to commute by bike because they think so.

Multiple issues: 'young generation' is incorrect collocation (should be 'young people' or 'the younger generation' — that's a lexical/adjective choice but treated here with tense/context). 'Prefer' is present tense and fine, but verb forms and nouns need correction: 'prefer riding bikes to travel' should be 'prefer riding bikes to travel' or better 'prefer to ride bikes to travel.' 'Communicate by bikes' is incorrect; likely intended 'commute by bike.' Also sentence ends abruptly 'because they think.' Needs completion: 'because they think so' or specify what they think. Suggestion: use 'young people' or 'the younger generation,' 'prefer to ride bikes' or 'prefer riding bikes,' 'commute by bike,' and add the idea they believe it is convenient or healthy if that was intended.