Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a fuller, natural response that directly answers and then adds one or two specific details. Start with a topic sentence, then briefly describe the bike (type, who gave it), how often you used it, and one memory or reason you liked it. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday. I rode it almost every day around the neighborhood, and I remember learning to balance on it with the help of my father. Because of that I became much more independent and confident while playing outside.

제안: Provide a clear opinion sentence followed by specific supporting details and a linking word. Mention who uses bikes (students, commuters), reasons for popularity (cheap, healthy, traffic), and give a brief example or comparison. Keep it concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and commuting. For example, students and office workers prefer bikes in crowded cities since they are inexpensive and faster than cars during rush hour.

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past-tense question ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?') which requires a full response using past tense. A bare 'Yes.' is short and acceptable in conversation but to match the grammatical structure, a full sentence 'Yes, I did.' supplies the auxiliary 'did' required for a past-simple yes/no answer. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I did.' or 'Yes, I had a bike.' to explicitly use past tense.

× Yes, I think.

✓ Yes, I think so.

The examiner asked a general present-tense question ('Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'). The student answered 'Yes, I think.' which is incomplete; native speakers commonly add 'so' after 'think' when agreeing with a yes/no question. While 'I think' can be used before a clause (e.g., 'I think they are'), here it lacks an object. Correction 'Yes, I think so.' or 'Yes, I think they are.' completes the thought. Suggestion: use 'so' as a short form or follow with the clause 'they are' to be grammatically complete.