Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is short and grammatically awkward for this context. Use a simple past affirmative or negative form correctly and add a brief reason or memory to make the response natural and informative. Keep it to 1–3 sentences and avoid contractions that sound unnatural in formal speaking.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a small apartment, so there wasn’t much space for bicycles, and I usually walked to school instead.

제안: This answer conveys the idea but is informal and a bit repetitive. Use a clear topic sentence, connect ideas with linking words, and give a specific example or reason. Avoid slang like “they're into it” in the exam; use more precise vocabulary such as “popular” or “common.” Limit to up to 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, cycling is very popular in the Philippines. In recent years more people have taken up cycling for exercise and commuting, and local governments have even created bike lanes in some cities to accommodate cyclists.

× No, I hadn't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The examiner asked 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' which uses the past simple. The student's reply used 'hadn't' (past perfect negative) which is incorrect here because there is no reference to an earlier past event before another past event. Use the past simple negative 'didn't' plus base verb 'have'. Suggestion: use 'No, I didn't' for simple past negative responses.

× Yep, they're into it and cycle is really popular in the Philippines so that's why bikers are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, people are into it and cycling is really popular in the Philippines, so that's why cyclists are popular in my country.

This sentence has multiple issues: 'they're into it' has an unclear subject 'they'—better to use 'people' to match general meaning. 'cycle is really popular' uses a noun where a gerund or noun form is needed; use 'cycling' to refer to the activity. 'bikers' is acceptable but 'cyclists' is more natural in this context. Also punctuation was adjusted for clarity. Suggestion: use explicit subject 'people', use 'cycling' for the activity, and 'cyclists' for people who cycle.