Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên, ngữ pháp và độ mạch lạc: tránh tiếng ồ ừ (umm, uh), sửa thì và cấu trúc động từ (ví dụ: 'I usually rode' hoặc 'I used to ride'), dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn. Ví dụ: mở đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp, rồi dùng một câu bổ trợ nêu lý do và một ví dụ ngắn. Giữ không quá 4–5 câu.

예시: Yes, I did. I used to ride a bike with my family almost every weekend. We cycled to a nearby park to get some exercise and enjoy the outdoors. Riding together helped us spend more time talking and became a family routine.

제안: Cải thiện phát ngôn rõ ràng, chính xác từ vựng và ngữ pháp: tránh lặp từ và tiếng ậm ừ, dùng cấu trúc đơn giản để bày tỏ ý kiến (ví dụ: 'Yes, they are popular because...'). Sử dụng từ vựng chính xác ('price' thay vì 'pay', 'affordable', 'many families own at least one bike') và cung cấp một ví dụ ngắn hoặc số liệu nếu có. Hạn chế câu quá dài và sửa lỗi động từ và danh từ số nhiều.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. They are affordable for most people and are practical for short trips. For example, many families own at least one bike for shopping or visiting neighbors.

× Yes, of course, when I was a child, I usually ride by with my family to umm, improve my health and uh, and uh, my and uh, connect the relationship in my family.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child, I usually rode bikes with my family to improve my health and to strengthen family relationships.

Student used present tense 'ride' while describing past habitual action 'when I was a child', so tense should be past ('rode'). 'Ride by with my family' is awkward and unclear; use 'rode bikes with my family'. Redundant filler words and broken phrase 'my and uh, connect the relationship in my family' should be replaced with 'to strengthen family relationships'. Suggestions: use past simple for past habits, remove fillers, choose clear verbs ('ride' -> 'rode', 'improve' and 'strengthen' parallel with 'to').

× Yes, of course, because I think umm uh pay for uh bike is affordable for every person a so my so in my country a pie is very popular.

✓ Yes, of course, because I think the price of bikes is affordable for everyone, so bicycles are very popular in my country.

Student used singular 'bike' and incorrect word 'pay for' and 'a pie' instead of 'price' and mismatched number. Correct phrasing is 'the price of bikes is affordable' or 'bike prices are affordable'. Use 'everyone' rather than 'every person a so my so'. Replace 'a pie' with 'price' and 'bike' plural 'bikes' or 'bicycles' to match general statement. Suggestion: use correct noun ('price'), ensure number agreement (plural for general statements), and use concise connectors ('so').

× Every umm family have one by.

✓ Every family has one bike.

Subject 'Every family' is singular and requires singular verb 'has', not 'have'. 'By' is a misspelling of 'bike'. Suggestion: use correct verb form with singular subjects and correct spelling ('bike').