Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and relevant to the question, use a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid irrelevant words like "communicate" for travel. Keep answer within 2–3 sentences, and add a brief specific detail (when/why).

예시: Yes. I didn’t have a bike as a child, so I used to walk to school every day. Now I own a bicycle because it’s faster and saves time during my commute.

제안: Start with a direct opinion, use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement), avoid repeating phrases, and replace incorrect words like "communicate" with "travel" or "get around." Add one specific reason and an example to support your view.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in Nepal. Many people use motorcycles and bicycles because they are affordable and convenient for short trips; for example, I see people commuting by bike to markets and schools every day.

× I even used to walk to the school every day, but now I have a bike which makes more comfortable to communicate every single day.

✓ I even used to walk to school every day, but now I have a bike which makes it more comfortable to commute every day.

The phrase 'to the school' is incorrect for habitual action; use 'to school' without an article. 'Makes more comfortable' is missing the pronoun 'it' to refer to the bike. 'Communicate' is the wrong verb; the intended meaning is 'commute'. Also 'every single day' is wordy; 'every day' is more natural. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles with institutions (go to school), add the pronoun 'it' after 'makes', and use the correct verb 'commute'.

× Yes, most of the people uses bike to communicate and to travel around, so it makes them much easier to commute every single things on time.

✓ Yes, most people use bikes to commute and travel around, so it makes it much easier for them to get everything done on time.

'Most of the people' is awkward; 'most people' is preferred. The verb should agree with plural subject: 'use' not 'uses'. 'Bike' should be plural as a general noun: 'bikes'. 'Communicate' is wrong; use 'commute'. 'Makes them much easier to commute every single things on time' is ungrammatical: need 'makes it much easier for them' and 'everything' instead of 'every single things'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, pluralize general nouns, use correct verbs, and use proper object pronouns and quantifiers.

× So it is so popular in here in my country Nepal.

✓ So it is very popular here in my country, Nepal.

The phrase 'in here' is incorrect; use 'here' or 'in my country' but not both 'in here' together. 'So popular' with double 'so' is informal and repetitive; 'very popular' is better. Also add a comma before the country name when used as an apposition: 'my country, Nepal'. Suggestion: remove redundant prepositions and punctuate apposition correctly.