Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Focus on correct grammar, conciseness, and clearer structure. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I did.”), then add one or two brief supporting details. Correct verb forms and possessive structures: say “my father had a bike” or “my father bought me a bike.” Avoid repetition and keep it to a maximum of 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. My father had a bicycle when I was a child, and I often rode it to visit friends in the neighborhood.

제안: Organize your answer: start with a clear opinion, then give two specific reasons with linking words (e.g. “because”, “so”, “therefore”). Correct grammar (e.g. “cars are highly taxed”) and avoid repeating words. Use precise vocabulary like “motorbikes”, “taxes”, “affordable”, and keep the response to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because cars are heavily taxed and therefore expensive to buy and maintain. As a result, many middle- and lower-income people prefer motorcycles or scooters since they are much more affordable.

× Yes, my father have a bike when I when I am a child.

✓ Yes, my father had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a past situation, so the verbs must be in the past tense and agree with their subjects. 'Father' is singular, so 'have' is incorrect; use the past tense 'had'. Also 'am a child' is present tense and should be 'was a child' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use consistent past tense forms for events in the past: 'had' and 'was'. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× Yes I'm in our country.

✓ Yes, they are popular in our country.

The original fragment 'Yes I'm in our country' is ungrammatical and doesn't answer the question. The speaker likely meant to confirm that bikes are popular in their country. Use a clear subject and verb: 'They are popular in our country.' This fixes sentence structure and clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Bikes are mostly popular because in our country car car are highly taxes so many middle class people and lower class people have no other options rather than to buy a bike.

✓ Bikes are very popular because cars are highly taxed in our country, so many middle-class and lower-class people have no option but to buy a bike.

Multiple issues: 'car car' is a repetition error; 'are highly taxes' uses wrong form—'taxes' is a noun not a verb, so use passive verb phrase 'are highly taxed'. Hyphenate 'middle-class' and 'lower-class' as compound adjectives before 'people'. 'Have no other options rather than to buy a bike' is awkward; the idiomatic phrase is 'have no option but to buy a bike.' Also 'mostly popular' is nonstandard; 'very popular' or 'quite popular' is better. These corrections address article/word form and phrasing problems. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× So mostly our country is popular bike.

✓ So, overall, bikes are popular in our country.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing function words. 'Our country is popular bike' is ungrammatical. Reorder to place the subject 'bikes' first and the predicate 'are popular in our country.' Adding a discourse marker like 'overall' or 'so' improves coherence. This fixes sentence structure and meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 26