Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğrudan soruyu yanıtlıyor fakat akıcılık, dilbilgisi ve tutarlılık sorunları var. Daha açık bir konu cümlesi kurun, gereksiz dolgu sözcüklerini (uh, um) azaltın ve olayın zamanını ve sonucu mantıklı bir sıra içinde verin. Ayrıca cümleleri 3-4 kısa cümle ile sınırlayın. Örneğin: geçmişte bisikletiniz olduğunu, başlangıçta sürmeyi bilmediğinizi, öğrenme sürecini ve şimdi ara sıra bisiklete bindiğinizi belirtin. Bağlaç olarak "but", "however", "after that" gibi kelimeler kullanarak akışı sağlayın.

예시: Yes. When I was a child my father bought me a bicycle, but at first I couldn't ride it. I practiced with his help for a few weeks, and after that I learned to balance and pedal properly. Now I occasionally go cycling in my free time to relax and exercise.

제안: Cevap net bir görüş sunuyor fakat dilbilgisi (subject-verb agreement), kelime seçimi ve cümle yapısı hataları var. "to the job" yerine "to work" gibi doğal ifadeler kullanın ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. Görüşünüzü desteklemek için kısa nedenler veya bir karşılaştırma ekleyin (örneğin trafik ve çevre faydaları). Bağlaçlar olarak "because", "however", "for example" kullanarak mantıklı akış oluşturun. Cevabı 2-3 cümleyle sınırlayın.

예시: No, bicycles are not very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for convenience and many others walk or use public transport. However, I wish more people would cycle because it would reduce traffic congestion and help the environment.

× So I remember once, uh, when I was a kid, my dad bought me a bike, but generally I wasn't able to ride it.

✓ So I remember once, when I was a kid, my dad bought me a bike, but generally I wasn't able to ride it.

The original sentence is mostly correct; removed filler 'uh' for clarity. Past simple 'bought' and 'wasn't able' correctly match the past time frame. Suggestion: avoid filler words in spoken answers to improve clarity.

× But I tried to learn it and it became a better Now, uh, when I have a free time, I mostly go out.

✓ I tried to learn to ride it and I got better. Now, when I have free time, I mostly go out.

The original contains incorrect phrase 'learn it' (need 'learn to ride it') and 'became a better' (wrong adjective use and missing object). Also 'a free time' is wrong article use. Use past tense 'tried' then simple past 'got better' is natural. 'When I have free time' requires no article. Suggestions: use 'learn to + verb' for skills and 'get better' for improvement; omit 'a' before uncountable 'free time' and avoid filler 'uh'.

× To me a bike N are not commonly used vehicle in my country because when I go out I see different people that use cars a lot and some of them prefer to walk to the job or maybe to the school.

✓ To me, bikes are not a commonly used vehicle in my country because when I go out I see many people who use cars a lot, and some of them prefer to walk to work or to school.

Original has 'a bike N are' which is garbled; subject-verb agreement and article errors occur. 'Bikes are' agrees in plural. 'a commonly used vehicle' mismatches plural 'bikes' so use plural or rephrase. 'Different people that' is awkward; use 'many people who'. 'Walk to the job' is incorrect collocation; use 'walk to work'. Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree in number, choose correct relative pronoun 'who' for people, and use natural collocations like 'go to work' or 'go to school'.

× But I would like for our people to use more bikes.

✓ But I would like our people to use more bikes.

The phrase 'would like for someone to do something' is acceptable but less natural in this context; removing 'for' makes it more fluent: 'would like our people to use more bikes.' Suggestion: when expressing a desire for others' actions, 'would like someone to do something' is preferred in modern spoken and written English.