Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and fluency, use a clear topic sentence and 1–2 supporting sentences with specific details. Avoid filler words (uh) and correct tense and word choice (use past tense: 'didn't have', not 'don't have'; 'when I was young', not 'tight'). Add a brief reason and a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Most places I needed to go, such as my school and the local park, were within walking distance, so my family and I usually walked. Walking was good exercise and helped me stay healthy.

제안: Improve pronunciation and grammar, provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific reasons and a linking word. Correct count and article usage ('most people', 'bikes are', 'cheap'). Add one concrete example or comparison to strengthen the answer.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people find them an affordable and convenient way to travel. For example, workers and students often ride bikes to avoid traffic, and government programs have made bicycles cheaper and more accessible.

× No, I don't have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense; change to 'didn't have' to match past time reference. Suggestion: Use past simple for habits or states in the past (I didn't have).

× When I was tight, uh, the places were near to my home, for example, the schools, the parks, they were all near to me.

✓ When I was a child, the places were near my home; for example, the schools and parks were all close to me.

'When I was tight' is incorrect wording; likely intended 'when I was a child.' 'Near to' is unidiomatic; use 'near' or 'close to.' The original mixes clauses and commas; clearer structure uses semicolon or separate clauses. Suggestion: use 'When I was a child' and 'close to me' for natural phrasing.

× So, uh, we used to walk from our house to parks and schools and, uh, it is really healthy for your body as well.

✓ So we used to walk from our house to the parks and schools, and it was really healthy for our bodies as well.

The time frame is past ('used to'), so the comment about health should match past tense: 'it is' should be 'it was.' Also use definite article 'the parks and schools' when referring to specific places previously mentioned. 'Your body' should match speaker perspective; use 'our bodies' for consistency. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and match pronouns to subject.

× Yes, I think bites are popular in my country most of the peoples have bikes.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country; most people have bikes.

Several issues: 'bites' is a spelling error for 'bikes' (not a listed type but corrected). 'Most of the peoples' is ungrammatical—'people' is already plural and does not take 's.' The clause should be two coordinated clauses; use a semicolon or conjunction. Suggestion: use 'most people' and correct spelling to 'bikes.'

× They use bike to uh, travel from one place to another place.

✓ They use bikes to travel from one place to another.

When referring generally, plural countable noun should be 'bikes' to match subject 'they.' Also use plural or article 'a bike' if singular: 'They use a bike to travel...' Preferred: 'They use bikes to travel...' Remove redundant 'place.' Suggestion: ensure noun number matches subject and avoid repetition.

× And the bike are really cheap in our country, so yes.

✓ And bikes are really cheap in our country, so yes.

'The bike are' is incorrect: singular noun 'bike' with plural verb 'are.' Either make noun plural 'bikes are' or keep singular with 'is' and an article: 'The bike is...' Context needs plural 'bikes are.' Also article 'the' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Suggestion: use 'bikes are' for general statements.