Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Expand the answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Mention what kind of bike it was, who gave it to you or how you used it, and a brief feeling or result to make the response more natural and informative.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about seven. For example, my parents bought it for me as a birthday present, and I practiced riding it every evening in the park until I learned to ride without help.

제안: Provide a direct topic sentence then add specific supporting reasons or examples with linking words. Comment on who uses bikes (children, commuters), where you see them (streets, parks), and why they are popular (cost, convenience, environment). Avoid repetition and fix grammatical errors.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For instance, many children ride them in parks and students cycle to school, and in cities you often see commuters using bikes because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips.

× Yes, I see a bike every day and a lot of kids are are using them.

✓ Yes, I see bikes every day and a lot of kids use them.

There are two issues: 1) Repetition of the word 'are' is a typographical/grammar error causing an ungrammatical construction; remove the duplicate 'are'. 2) Use consistent plural and verb agreement: 'a bike every day' is acceptable but sounds odd when referring to many observations; changing to 'bikes' matches the general statement. For the second clause, use the simple present 'kids use them' to express habitual action rather than the continuous 'are using', which implies an action happening right now. Suggestion: say 'Yes, I see bikes every day and a lot of kids use them.' This fixes the repetition, matches plural usage, and uses the correct tense for habitual activities.