Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise: begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers like "uh" and try to give a short example or reason to enrich the answer.

예시: Yes, I did — I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight. I often rode it in the evenings after school to visit my friends, and sometimes I practiced riding on the quiet street near our house to get better.

제안: Give a more balanced, specific answer and avoid absolute statements. Start with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons or examples and a linking word (e.g., "because", "for example").

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people use them to commute to markets or schools, and in some cities you can even find bike-sharing schemes.

× I used to ride in the evenings.

✓ I used to ride in the evenings.

No correction needed. The sentence correctly uses 'used to' to describe a habitual past action. Keep as is.

× Every household has a bike.

✓ Many households have bikes.

The original sentence 'Every household has a bike' is grammatically acceptable but can sound too absolute. If the student means that bicycles are common, using plural 'households' and 'bikes' is more natural: subject and noun agree in number. Suggestion: use 'Many households have bikes' to avoid overgeneralization and ensure plural agreement between subject and object.