Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu trật tự và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm lủng củng và dùng từ không chính xác. Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tuổi khi học, ai dạy, cảm giác khi học), dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán và liên kết các phần bằng từ nối đơn giản. Hạn chế lặp từ và tiếng lòng vòng (uh, um).

예시: Yes, I did. When I was about six, my father bought me a small red bicycle and I practised riding almost every day. My older brother taught me how to balance and I remember feeling excited but a little scared at first.

제안: Ý chính được truyền đạt nhưng cấu trúc câu lộn xộn, lỗi ngữ pháp và nhiều tiếng ngắt quãng. Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn với lý do cụ thể (thời kỳ, nguyên nhân, hiện tại thay đổi), dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'however' để liên kết ý. Tránh dùng nhiều tiếng ỳ ậm và sửa ngữ pháp ('the economy was', 'more popular now').

예시: I think bicycles used to be very popular in the past because the economy was weaker and people preferred a cheaper way to travel. However, nowadays motorbikes have become more common because they are faster and more convenient for longer distances.

× Just definitely when I was so young, my dad bought for me a bicycle and I try to ride, I try to learn how to ride a bike almost every day.

✓ When I was very young, my dad bought me a bicycle and I tried to ride; I tried to learn how to ride a bike almost every day.

The sentence mixes past and present verbs. The actions happened in the past, so verbs should be in past tense (bought -> correct, try -> tried). 'Bought for me' is unnatural in English; use 'bought me a bicycle'. 'So young' is informal and awkward here; 'very young' is more natural. Use consistent past tense for repeated past actions: 'tried to learn' rather than 'try to learn'. Suggestion: Maintain past tense for events in the past, replace 'bought for me' with 'bought me', and use 'very' instead of 'so' for clarity.

× Umm, I think in the past is uh is so popular uh because the the economic at that time is not uh too good uh. So nowadays uh motorbike is becoming more popular.

✓ I think in the past bikes were very popular because the economy at that time was not very strong. Nowadays motorbikes are becoming more popular.

The sentence uses incorrect present tense 'is' and inconsistent verb forms with reference to the past. When talking about past states, use past tense: 'were' for 'bikes were popular'. 'The economic' is incorrect; use 'the economy'. 'Is not too good' should be past: 'was not very strong' or 'was not very good'. Also replace colloquial fillers and repeated words. 'Motorbike' plural 'motorbikes' fits general statement. Suggestion: Use past tense for past situations (were, was), use the noun 'economy', and make subjects and verbs agree in number.