Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm, yeah) and unnecessary repetition. Add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "however", "now") to explain how you use the bike today. Keep it to 2–4 sentences total.

예시: Yes, I did. I learned to ride when I was about six and rode it to visit friends and play in the park. However, I still own that bike and now I use it occasionally for short rides around my neighborhood for exercise.

제안: Begin with a clear opinion, then support it with two specific reasons linked with connectors (e.g., "because", "for example", "therefore"). Remove hesitations and correct small grammar (use singular/plural and articles). Keep it concise and use context-relevant vocabulary (climate, infrastructure, public transport).

예시: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in the Philippines because the climate is hot and humid, which makes cycling uncomfortable for long journeys. For example, many people prefer cars or buses because they are faster and because there is limited cycling infrastructure in many cities.

× Hi, yeah, I've had a bike when I was a child.

✓ Hi, yeah, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used present perfect ('I've had') with a specific finished time in the past ('when I was a child'), which is incorrect. Use simple past ('I had') for actions completed at a definite past time. Suggestion: use simple past for past events tied to a specific time reference.

× I still have a bike today, but umm, I'm only using it, umm, not all the time.

✓ I still have a bike today, but I only use it sometimes.

The original mixes present continuous ('I'm only using it') with a general habit ('not all the time'), which is better expressed with the simple present for habitual actions. Also replace 'not all the time' with 'sometimes' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and habits (I use, he goes).

× No, I don't think bikes are popular in our country because Philippines is very hot and humid country so umm some people, yeah some people use it but most people uses their cars or take the bus rather than using bikes.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in our country because the Philippines is a very hot and humid country, so some people use them, but most people use their cars or take the bus rather than using bikes.

Multiple issues: (1) Missing definite article before country name: use 'the Philippines'. (2) Missing article before 'very hot and humid country': need 'a'. (3) Pronoun-number agreement: 'bikes' is plural so refer to them as 'them' (not 'it'). (4) Subject-verb agreement: 'most people use' (not 'uses'). Suggestion: include articles where needed, match pronouns to plural nouns, and use correct verb forms for plural subjects.