Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep answers direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid hesitations, contradictions, and irrelevant phrases (e.g. "pet peeve" is odd here). Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, "because" or "so"). Aim for 2–4 fluent sentences and avoid filler sounds like "uh."

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I preferred walking or playing football with friends instead because my family lived close to school and there was little space to ride. As a result, I never learned to ride well, though I sometimes wish I had tried.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Organize your response with linking words such as "however," "for example," or "because." Avoid repeating words or unclear phrases; speak in complete sentences. If you are unsure, say something like "I think" and then give a brief reason or example.

예시: I think bicycles are not very popular in my country. For example, most people use motorbikes or cars for commuting because roads are long and cycling infrastructure is limited. However, in some rural areas and other African countries, bicycles are more common for short trips and market visits.

× I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

No correction needed; sentence correctly uses past simple negative to describe a past state. Keep as is.

× It was as a matter of fact, riding a bike is not my favorite thing.

✓ As a matter of fact, riding a bike is not my favorite thing.

The original sentence misorders 'as a matter of fact' and uses an unnecessary 'It was', creating a sentence structure error. Start with the discourse marker 'As a matter of fact' followed by the main clause. This yields a clear, grammatical sentence. Suggestion: Place transitional phrases at the beginning or where they naturally fit and avoid redundant dummy subjects like 'It was' here.

× Uh, so this is my biggest pet peeve.

✓ So, this is my biggest pet peeve.

The original uses filler 'Uh,' which is fine in speech but unnecessary in writing. The structure is otherwise correct. Remove the filler for a cleaner sentence. Ensure punctuation follows the discourse marker.

× Umm, I don't think in my country I guess unpopular and prestigious I do yeah umm another the African country is have have a popular bikes.

✓ I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. I guess they are more common and prestigious in some other African countries.

The original sentence is fragmented, repetitive and ungrammatical. Errors include incorrect word order, missing subjects, incorrect articles, and repetition ('have have'). The corrected version uses a clear subject-verb structure ('bikes are...'), correct adjective placement ('very popular'), proper plural agreement ('countries'), and removes filler words. Suggestions: plan the sentence before speaking, use clear subject-verb-object order, avoid repeating words, and use articles and plural forms correctly (e.g., 'other African countries', not 'another the African country').