Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: تحسين البنية اللغوية وتجنب الأخطاء النحوية والسياقية: قلل من استخدام الأرقام بدل الكلمات، ضع جملة موضوع واضحة ثم تفاصيل داعمة مترابطة باستخدام كلمات ربط، وصحح الأخطاء في تركيب الجملة (مثلاً: ‘We often rode together around the neighborhood’). اجعل الإجابة بين 2-4 جمل متماسكة.

예시: I didn't own a bicycle as a child, but I often borrowed one from my cousin. We rode together around the neighborhood every weekend, exploring nearby streets and parks. Those rides were a big part of my childhood fun.

제안: اجعل الإجابة أكثر تحديداً وقدّم أسباباً مفصلة مترابطة باستخدام كلمات ربط: اذكر أمثلة أو إحصاءات مبسطة، وصحّح العبارات غير الطبيعية مثل ‘advanced trans transportation’ وابتعد عن ‘etcetera’. استخدم 2-3 جمل واضحة ومترابطة.

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or buses for convenience. Additionally, poor cycling infrastructure and heavy traffic discourage people from riding. As a result, cycling is more common for leisure than for daily commuting.

× I didn't have a bicycle when I was a child, but I used to borrow 1 from my cousin.

✓ I didn't have a bicycle when I was a child, but I used to borrow one from my cousin.

The sentence uses the past tense correctly, but contains the numeral '1' instead of the word 'one', which is inappropriate in formal writing and speech. Replace '1' with the word 'one' to maintain grammatical and stylistic correctness.

× We often together around the neighborhood and had a lot of fun.

✓ We often walked together around the neighborhood and had a lot of fun.

The original sentence lacks a verb after the adverb 'often'. In English, 'often' must be followed by a verb; here the intended action is 'walked'. Also place 'together' after the verb or after the verb phrase for natural word order. Suggest practicing subject-verb-object order and ensuring adverbs are followed by verbs.

× I don't think so, because most people in my country prefer advanced trans transportation like car, bus and etcetera.

✓ I don't think so, because most people in my country prefer more advanced transportation, like cars and buses, etcetera.

There are several issues: 'trans transportation' is a redundancy and likely a typo; use 'more advanced transportation' to compare. 'Car, bus' should be plural when speaking generally ('cars and buses'). 'Etcetera' is acceptable but should follow a comma and not repeat 'and'. Practice using comparative forms and plural nouns when referring to categories in general.