Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a fuller response: start with a clear topic sentence and add one or two supporting details (where, how often, who with), using linking words if needed. Keep it natural and under five sentences. For example, say whether you owned or borrowed a bike, describe how you used it, and mention a brief reason or memory.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride to school and to visit friends, and I often rode with my older brother. Because our neighborhood was safe and quiet, biking was my favourite way to get around.

제안: Make your answer more natural and coherent: begin with a clear opinion, then give two specific reasons and link them with connectors (for example, "because", "so", "also"). Avoid repetition and grammatical errors; keep it within four sentences. Mention concrete examples like commuting, exercise, or tourism to strengthen your point.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because the warm, sunny climate makes riding comfortable year-round. Also, many people use bicycles for short commutes and exercise, especially in coastal towns where cycling paths are common. As a result, you often see both locals and tourists cycling for transport and leisure.

× 'I think yes, it is popular in our country because our country is a tropical country where the weather was beautiful.'

✓ 'I think so; bikes are popular in our country because it is a tropical country where the weather is nice.'

'Present tense should be used consistently when stating general facts. The original mixes present (is popular) and past (was beautiful) which is incorrect for a general statement. "I think yes" is unnatural; use "I think so". Replaced "our country is a tropical country" with "it is a tropical country" to avoid repetition. "Beautiful" describing typical weather is better as "nice" or "pleasant" in this context. Suggestion: keep present simple when describing general truths (e.g., "it is", "bikes are").' },{