Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar accuracy and fluency, remove fillers, and combine short fragments into a clear concise response. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. Aim for 2–3 sentences with correct tense and smoother phrasing.

예시: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me as a gift when I was five, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend.

제안: Clarify meaning, use correct tense and subject-verb agreement, and structure the reply with a clear topic sentence followed by a specific reason and a short example. Use linking words (however, but, because) properly and avoid repetition.

예시: They became much more popular during the COVID-19 pandemic. Before that, few people used bikes, but during lockdowns many turned to cycling to exercise and avoid crowded public transport, so bicycle sales and cycling clubs increased.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so present tense 'have' is incorrect. Use past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Grammar Problem Type ID: 6

× When I was a child.

✓ When I was a child, it was gifted to me by my father.

This fragment lacks a main verb and cannot stand alone as a complete sentence. Combine it with the following clause or add a verb to make a full sentence. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× It was gifted to me by my father, uh, when I was five years old.

✓ It was a gift from my father when I was five years old.

The original passive 'was gifted' is grammatically possible but sounds awkward in this context. Rephrasing to 'was a gift from' is more natural. Also remove filler 'uh' for clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID: 21

× Bikes were not popular in our country before but they think pandemic days it went really really popular because I think people has nothing to do with the situation and they went healthy living and yes bikes became popular but were not popular.

✓ Bikes were not popular in our country before, but during the pandemic they became very popular because people had little else to do and wanted to live more healthily.

Multiple errors: tense consistency and word choice. 'They think pandemic days' is incorrect; use 'during the pandemic' (preposition error and phrase structure). 'It went really really popular' is wrong—use 'became very popular' (past tense of 'become'). 'People has' is subject-verb disagreement; use 'people had'. 'They went healthy living' is incorrect verb and structure; use 'wanted to live more healthily' or 'took up healthier lifestyles'. Overall rewrite keeps past tense and clarifies meaning. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5},{