Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more natural and grammatical by giving a clear topic sentence, correcting tense and word order, avoiding repetition, and adding one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Keep it under five sentences. For example, say you didn’t own a bike but practiced on your brother’s, and mention one clear purpose or memory.

예시: I didn’t have my own bike as a child, but I often used my younger brother’s bicycle to practice. For example, I rode it to the local market to help my parents buy groceries, which helped me become confident riding on busy streets.

제안: Provide a direct topic sentence about popularity, then support it with concise, specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (use ‘motorbikes’ or ‘motorcycles’ and clear phrases like ‘because of’). Avoid filler words and repetition. Limit to two to three sentences.

예시: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in my country because traffic is heavy and they are cheaper to run than cars. For example, many people choose motorbikes due to high petrol prices and limited parking in cities.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but my younger brother has one.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but my younger brother had one.

The sentence is in past context ('when I was a child'), so the contrast should use past tense for both clauses. Using 'has' (present) mixes tenses incorrectly. Use 'had' to maintain past timeline.

× I use that bike to practice.

✓ I used that bike to practice.

The speaker refers to past habit during childhood, so the verb should be in past simple ('used') rather than present ('use'). Keep tense consistent with 'when I was a child.'

× I use that bike and buying some things, especially when going to the market My.

✓ I used that bike to buy some things, especially when going to the market.

The original mixes verb forms ('use' and 'buying') and has word order issues ('market My'). Correct by using past simple 'used' and the infinitive 'to buy' to express purpose, and place 'My' correctly or remove it; here 'my' was extraneous.

× My country umm there is a big traffic here and most of the people are using motorcycle but because of the expense in gasoline most people often use use by.

✓ In my country, there is heavy traffic and most people use motorcycles; however, because of the high cost of gasoline, many people often use bicycles.

Several problems: missing preposition 'In' before 'my country', awkward phrasing 'a big traffic' should be 'heavy traffic', plural agreement for 'motorcycles', repetition 'use use', and unclear 'use by' likely meant 'use bicycles'. Also adjust vocabulary 'expense in gasoline' to 'high cost of gasoline' and connect ideas with 'however' to clarify contrast.