Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve clarity, grammar and conciseness. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using clear linking words. Correct verb forms and article use (e.g., 'the road conditions were rough' and 'it wasn't suitable'). Avoid redundant phrases and long noun strings.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. The roads near my home were in poor condition and very crowded, so it wasn't safe to cycle. For example, there were many potholes and heavy traffic, which made riding a bike risky.

제안: Make a clear, concise opinion sentence, then support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'for example.' Avoid repetitions and fill words. Use singular/plural correctly ('cars are the most common vehicle').

예시: No, bicycles aren't very popular in my country. Cars are the most common form of transport because they are faster and more convenient for long distances; for example, many people prefer driving to work rather than cycling.

× 'When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because the road situation, load condition is so rough and it's not suitable for us to ride the bike in my city.'

✓ 'When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because the road conditions and traffic were so rough that it wasn't suitable for us to ride bikes in my city.'

'Error type: incorrect prepositions and noun forms. The phrase "the road situation, load condition" is unnatural and uses wrong nouns; use "road conditions and traffic". Replace "is so rough" with past tense "were so rough" to match the past time frame. Use "it wasn't suitable for us to ride bikes" rather than "it's not suitable... to ride the bike" to match past tense and pluralize "bikes'.

× 'Well you know in my country the bicycle is not not common way to go around because car the cars cars are most com most common way most most common vehicle.'

✓ 'Well, you know, in my country bicycles are not a common way to get around because cars are the most common vehicle.'

'Error type: sentence structure and repetition issues. The original has repeated words, incorrect word order, and wrong singular/plural agreement. Use commas after introductory phrase, pluralize "bicycles" to match general statement, use "a common way to get around" for idiomatic phrasing, and correct "car the cars cars are most common" to "cars are the most common vehicle'.'