Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and ungrammatical. Give a direct topic sentence, use past tense for childhood, and add one or two short supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences). Use linking words (e.g., but, so, because) if you add reasons or contrast. For example, say whether you owned a bike, who bought it or why you didn’t, and one short detail about how you felt or what you did with it.

예시: I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child, but I often borrowed my neighbour’s bicycle to ride around the neighbourhood. Because I lived near a park, I used to ride there with friends at weekends and felt very happy and free.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains word order and vocabulary errors. Start with a clear topic sentence about popularity, then give specific examples and a brief reason using linking words (for example, because or mainly). Mention brand names correctly and avoid repeating phrases. Keep it concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for city travel. For example, many people ride models like the Bajaj Pulsar 150 and Royal Enfield motorcycles, and sports bikes from KTM and Duke are also common among young riders.

× I don't have a in childhood, I am by a bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike in my childhood; I rode a bike.

This sentence has tense and sentence structure errors (present tense and incorrect word order). According to the transcript question about the past, use past tense. Replace 'don't have' with 'didn't have' for past possession. 'a in childhood' is wrong order and missing noun; correct phrase is 'a bike in my childhood' or 'in my childhood'. 'I am by a bike' is ungrammatical; likely intended meaning is past action 'I rode a bike'. Suggestion: use simple past for past situations and arrange words in the typical English order: subject + verb + object. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yeah I in my country popular bikes KTM, Duke Royal Enfield and Trump in Bajaj Pulsar 150 in my country as a popular in this bikes are.

✓ Yeah. In my country, popular bikes include KTM Duke, Royal Enfield, Triumph, and the Bajaj Pulsar 150.

This sentence has many issues: incorrect word order, repetition, and missing verbs, which are sentence structure errors. List items should follow a clear structure: introductory phrase 'In my country', then a verb like 'popular bikes include' followed by the list of models separated by commas. Correct company/model names: 'Triumph' likely intended instead of 'Trump'. Avoid repeating 'in my country' twice. Suggestion: use a clear subject and verb ('popular bikes include') and then provide a comma-separated list of bike names. Grammar problem type ID:26