Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변을 더 명확하고 자연스럽게 하려면 주제문으로 시작한 뒤 한두 개의 구체적인 이유를 연결어(예: because, so, and)로 이어 짧고 명확한 문장으로 말하세요. 불필요한 중복과 말더듬을 줄이고 시제 일관성(과거형 또는 현재형)을 유지하세요. 예: 아동기에 자전거를 가졌는지 질문에는 간단한 주제문(Yes, I did.)을 사용하고, 누구와 탔는지, 왜 좋아했는지 한두 문장으로 구체적으로 설명하세요.

예시: Yes, I did. I usually rode it with my younger brother because we liked racing each other around the neighborhood. I enjoyed cycling because it made me feel free and the wind on my face was refreshing.

제안: 답변을 더 논리적이고 구체적으로 만들려면 주제문으로 의견을 밝힌 뒤 근거를 2가지 정도 제시하세요(공공자전거 서비스, 환경/교통 이유 등). 연결어(For example, because, therefore)를 사용해 문장들을 자연스럽게 이어가고, 불분명한 표현(예: "equal darani")은 명확한 용어("public bike-sharing service")로 대체하세요.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular. For example, many cities provide public bike-sharing services, so people can borrow a bike easily on the street. Also, cycling is promoted as a cheap and eco-friendly way to travel, which makes it a common choice for short trips.

× Yes, I have a bike I I usually ride with my with my younger brother use that because I'll I I like the bike because I can ride if I ride the bike, I can fast and the windy windy cross me the that feels so cool and I like.

✓ Yes, I had a bike. I usually rode it with my younger brother because I liked the bike. When I rode it, I could ride fast and feel the wind, which felt so cool.

The student mixes present and past tenses and uses incorrect continuous forms. Use past simple to match the question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'. Replace present participle constructions and fragmented clauses with clear past simple verbs: 'had', 'rode', 'liked', 'could ride', 'felt'. Combine clauses correctly and use relative pronoun 'which' to link the wind feeling. Suggestions: maintain consistent past tense for past events, avoid redundant words, and use simple past for completed actions.

× Yeah, I yes, I I think the bike is popular in my country because the government and the cities offer the service of the bike about the equal darani it is I can I can borrow the bike everywhere I in the street, in the street on on the street so.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because the government and cities offer bike-sharing services. I can borrow a bike everywhere on the street.

The student uses inconsistent singular/plural and awkward present tense phrases. Use present simple for general facts: 'I think', 'bikes are popular', 'offer'. Use plural 'bikes' and the term 'bike-sharing services' for clarity. Use 'a bike' when referring to an unspecified single bike and 'everywhere on the street' to correct preposition order. Suggestions: keep subject-verb agreement, choose correct singular/plural forms, and use established terms like 'bike-sharing' for clarity.