Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is short and natural but too brief. To improve, give a direct topic sentence then 1–2 supporting details (e.g., how old you were, what kind of bike, or a memory). Use a linking word if adding more than one detail. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven — it was a red bicycle with training wheels. Because my neighborhood was safe, I spent a lot of time riding with friends in the evenings.

제안: This is a strong, well-structured answer: a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details and reasons. To reach a perfect score, add a brief example or personal observation and a linking phrase to improve coherence slightly.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my city because there are many parks and dedicated cycling lanes. Moreover, they are affordable and ideal for short trips, so many people ride to avoid traffic and save money; for example, I often see commuters cycling to the train station during rush hour.

× Yeah, I did.

✓ Yeah, I did.

This response is a grammatically acceptable informal short answer to the question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' It correctly uses the past tense auxiliary 'did' and needs no correction.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in my city where there are many parks and dedicated cycling lanes.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in my city where there are many parks and dedicated cycling lanes.

This sentence is grammatically correct. The subject-verb agreement is correct ('bikes are'), the relative clause 'where there are many parks...' is appropriate, and prepositions and articles are used correctly.

× They are quite affordable to buy and convenient for short trips, so a lot of people prefer biking to avoid traffic and save money.

✓ They are quite affordable to buy and convenient for short trips, so a lot of people prefer biking to avoid traffic and save money.

This sentence is grammatically correct. Verb forms, parallel structure ('affordable... and convenient...'), and the use of 'prefer biking' are acceptable in conversational English. No correction is necessary.