Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần chính xác về thì và ngữ pháp, rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi số nhiều/số ít và dùng câu chủ đề rồi thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Hãy dùng thì quá khứ (I had), sửa lỗi danh từ đếm được (children → children, every children → every child), và tách ý thành 1–2 câu ngắn gọn, có liên kết rõ ràng (for example, because).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. For example, every child in my neighborhood owned a bike and we often rode them on weekends to learn about traffic and become more confident on the road.

제안: Câu trả lời nên trực tiếp bắt đầu bằng ý chính (No, I don't think so) rồi phát triển bằng lý do cụ thể và ví dụ. Tránh các cụm dư thừa như “my answer is” và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (motorbikes, private transport). Nên nối các ý bằng từ liên kết như “because” hoặc “for example”.

예시: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorbikes and cars for daily travel. For example, in my city many families own at least one motorbike, which is faster and more convenient for commuting.

× Absolutely I have because I think in my country every children have a bike for break days and get used to the road and the traffic in my country.

✓ Absolutely I did, because I think in my country every child has a bike for break days and gets used to the road and the traffic.

Errors include incorrect tense: the question asks about the past ('Did you have'), so the response should use past tense ('did') rather than present ('have'). Singular/plural mismatch: 'every children' is ungrammatical; use 'every child' (every requires singular). Subject-verb agreement: with singular 'child' use 'has' not 'have'. Parallel verb agreement: 'every child... gets used' (singular subject) rather than 'get used'. Suggestions: match the tense to the question (use past simple), use 'every' with a singular noun, and ensure verbs agree in number with their subjects.

× From my point of view, my answer is no, because people in my country usually use private transport like motorbike or car to go to the road.

✓ From my point of view, my answer is no, because people in my country usually use private transport like motorcycles or cars to go on the road.

Issues: slight word choice and count nouns: 'motorbike or car' is better as plural 'motorcycles or cars' when speaking generally. Preposition: use 'go on the road' rather than 'go to the road' to indicate traveling on roads. Tense is acceptable (present simple for general facts). Suggestions: use plural nouns for general statements and correct prepositions for natural collocations.