Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and clearly with a simple topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using clear linking words. Avoid long confusing phrases and grammatical errors (tense, articles, pronouns). Keep it under five sentences. For example, state you had a bike, who used it, and a clear memory or reason why it mattered.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It belonged to both my sister and me, so we often shared it after school. Because we shared the bike, I remember learning to ride carefully and taking turns with her.

제안: Begin with a clear opinion, then support it with two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, and, therefore). Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use correct vocabulary (popular, affordable, convenient) and simple sentence structures to improve clarity.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable for many people and easy to maintain. Also, they are convenient for short trips in crowded cities, so many students and workers choose them.

× Yes, I had a bike back then when I was in child as I really haven't a very strong memory with their bike as their bike was actually part of the money of me and my sister which we own by going on like Carol type of.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I do not have a very clear memory of it; the bike belonged to my sister and me and we bought it together.

Multiple sentence structure and related grammar issues: 'in child' is incorrect (should be 'a child'); 'I really haven't a very strong memory with their bike' mixes tenses and wrong pronoun 'their' (use 'of it' or 'the bike'); 'their bike was actually part of the money of me and my sister which we own by going on like Carol type of' is ungrammatical and unclear. Suggested improvements: break into two clauses, use correct noun phrase 'a child', use 'do not have' or 'did not have' depending on intended meaning (use present 'do not have' for current lack of memory), use 'belonged to my sister and me' for possession, and 'we bought it together' to express joint purchase. Keep verb tenses consistent and avoid filler fragments.

× Yeah I do think we'll buy garbage popular in my country as it is one of the transportation which can be actually affordable by a lot of new people and also it also easier for any people to ride on it rather than actually go on AI don't know.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular in my country because they are an affordable form of transportation for many people, and they are easier to ride than other options.

Multiple issues: 'we'll buy garbage popular' is nonsensical and likely a speech error; 'one of the transportation' should be 'a form of transportation'; 'can be actually affordable by a lot of new people' has incorrect preposition and phrasing (use 'affordable for many people'); 'also it also easier' lacks verb 'is'; 'rather than actually go on AI don't know' is incoherent. Suggestions: replace unclear phrases with concise expressions, use 'are' for plural subject agreement, use 'affordable for', include verb 'is' where needed, and remove filler words. Ensure subject-verb agreement and clear comparative structure.