Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and naturalness: use past tense consistently and give a short elaboration. Keep the answer concise (1–3 sentences) and avoid repetition. For example, start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one specific detail (where you rode it or who gave it to you).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents gave me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend.

제안: Focus on clarity and coherence: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, however, therefore). Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and remove filler words. Keep within 3–4 sentences maximum.

예시: Yes, bikes are still fairly popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. However, with growing incomes many people now prefer motorbikes or cars, especially in the city where traffic is heavy.

× Yes, of course I have a bike when I am a child.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a child'), so the verbs must be in the past tense. Using present tense 'have' and 'am' is incorrect. Change 'have' to 'had' and 'am' to 'was' to match the past time reference.

× So in today's modern era, everybody have their own vehicles, have their own private vehicles.

✓ So in today's modern era, everybody has their own vehicles, their own private vehicles.

Everybody is an indefinite singular pronoun and requires a singular verb form. Use 'has' instead of 'have'. Also avoid repeating 'have'—use 'their own vehicles, their own private vehicles' or better 'their own private vehicles.'