Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise, and slightly more detailed. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds and repetitive phrases.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it every day to and from school, and I often raced with my friends in the neighborhood, which helped me become more confident on the road.

제안: Give a direct opinion and support it with specific reasons and a brief example. Use clear linking words (for example, however, because) and correct grammar. Avoid repetition and vague phrases.

예시: No, bicycles are not very popular in my country because public transport and motorcycles are more common. For example, most people prefer scooters for short trips, so you rarely see many bikes on the main roads.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was child and I used to use it every time I went, uh, I came from school.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I used to use it every time I came home from school.

The student mixes present tense 'have' with past time expression 'when I was a child.' Use past tense 'had' to match the time frame (Grammar Problem Type ID 6: Present tense issue). Also add the article 'a' before 'child' and correct the phrase 'went, uh, I came from school' to 'came home from school' for natural word order and clarity. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for memories (had, used to) and include necessary articles and correct verb phrase 'come home from school.' Grammar problem type ID:6

× No, the bikes are not that popular in our country and it and it is here to see bikes in our country.

✓ No, bikes are not that popular in our country and it is rare to see bikes here.

The original sentence has redundant words ('the bikes' and repeated 'it and it') and awkward phrasing. Use plural 'bikes' without 'the' for general statements, and replace 'it is here to see bikes in our country' with 'it is rare to see bikes here' for correct meaning and structure (Grammar Problem Type ID 1: Singular and plural issue). Also remove redundancy. Suggestion: keep general statements without 'the' and use clear expressions like 'rare to see.' Grammar problem type ID:1