Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use past tense consistently and give a brief extra detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one short supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a red bicycle with a basket, and I used to ride it to school almost every day.

제안: Work on clarity, grammar, and coherence: start with a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons using linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so'). Correct subject-verb agreement and avoid filler words like 'umm'. Be specific—mention factors such as traffic, cost of fuel, or health benefits. Keep the answer within 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in the Philippines. For example, many people choose to cycle because it helps them avoid heavy traffic and saves money on fuel.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student mixed present tense 'have' with a past time marker 'when I was a child'. This is a Present tense issue (ID 6). Use past tense 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: Use consistent tense with time expressions (e.g., 'when I was a child I had...'). Grammar problem type ID:6

× On my thing, bike is popular in the Philippines because most likely people likes to bike instead of walking and umm driving a car because of the gas.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are popular in the Philippines because most people prefer biking to walking or driving because of the cost of gas.

This sentence contains several errors that match multiple types: incorrect phrase 'On my thing' should be 'In my opinion' (Incorrect use of pronouns/phrasing - ID 12), 'bike is popular' should be plural 'bikes are popular' (Singular and plural issue - ID 1), 'people likes' uses incorrect third-person singular verb form; with plural subject it should be 'people like' or better 'most people prefer' (Third person singular issue - ID 2), and awkward phrasing 'instead of walking and umm driving a car because of the gas' needs rewording and a clearer noun 'cost of gas' (Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and sentence structure - ID 13 and 26). Suggestions: Use 'In my opinion' for personal view, match noun and verb number (bikes are), use correct verb for plural subject ('people prefer' or 'people like'), and replace 'the gas' with 'the cost of gas' or 'high gas prices' for clarity.