Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify tense and grammar, give a direct topic sentence, add one or two specific details, and keep it concise. For example, use past simple correctly, correct noun/pronoun agreement, and avoid unnecessary words. Use a linking word if adding a reason or memory.

예시: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child — a red Tyson bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday. It had a low frame and training wheels at first, and I rode it every afternoon to the park until I learned to cycle without them.

제안: Give a clear direct opinion first, then support it with specific, coherent reasons using linking words. Use correct vocabulary for transport (e.g., public transport, buses, subways) and avoid fragmented phrases. Keep to 1–3 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'however'.

예시: I think bikes are less common in my country because many people rely on public transport such as buses and the subway for daily commuting. However, cycling is becoming more popular in some cities due to bike lanes and growing environmental awareness.

× When I was childhood I had the Tyson bicycle.

✓ When I was a child, I had the Tyson bicycle.

The phrase 'when I was childhood' is incorrect because 'childhood' is a noun and requires a different structure; use the expression 'a child' to refer to a person at that age. Also add a comma after the introductory phrase. Suggestion: use 'When I was a child' or 'In my childhood' depending on context.

× It have to.

✓ It did.

'It have to' is ungrammatical: 'have' does not agree with the singular subject 'it', and the phrase 'have to' expresses obligation, which doesn't fit the intended meaning. The student likely wanted to say 'It did' (past simple) to affirm possession in response to 'Did you have a bike?'. Suggestion: use 'It did' or 'Yes, I did' for short answers in past tense.

× Not sure because emergency most people use such as sub numbers like public transport transformation.

✓ I'm not sure, because in an emergency most people use public transportation.

The original sentence has multiple structure and word choice errors. It lacks a subject ('I'm'), misuses 'because emergency' instead of 'because in an emergency', and contains unclear phrases ('such as sub numbers like public transport transformation'). The corrected sentence supplies the subject and reorganizes the idea: 'in an emergency most people use public transportation.' Suggestions: include a subject and verb, use clear vocabulary ('in an emergency', 'public transportation' or 'public transport'), and avoid redundant or unclear modifiers.