Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear. Start with a simple topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two brief, specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitation words (uh, um) and unclear phrases. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because my parents lived nearby, I often rode to visit friends, which helped me gain confidence and balance.

제안: Answer directly, then give clear specific reasons with linking words. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "motorbike" or "bicycle") and correct grammar for comparison and cause. Limit to 2–4 sentences and avoid vague statements.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles and motorbikes are very popular in my country. For example, many delivery workers and civil servants use motorbikes because they are quick and cheaper than cars. In addition, bikes are convenient in crowded cities, so people often prefer them for short trips.

× Uh, I think this time I have no idea how, uh, how to run by and that's why this time I have no bike.

✓ I think I do not know how to ride a bike, so I do not have one.

The original mixes tenses and uses incorrect verbs and expressions. 'Have no idea how' should be 'do not know how' to match present simple. 'Run by' is incorrect for bicycles; the correct verb is 'ride'. The repetition 'this time' is unnecessary and awkward. Use 'so' to connect cause and effect. Suggestion: use clear present simple forms for general abilities (I do not know how to ride).

× Yes, I think by car most popular vehicles in my country lots of people using bikes for many many kinds of work like someone or government service holder.

✓ Yes, I think cars are the most popular vehicles in my country, but many people use bikes for many kinds of work, including government employees.

Multiple errors: 'by car most popular vehicles' has word order and article errors; it should be 'cars are the most popular vehicles' (plural subject and verb agreement). 'Lots of people using' lacks auxiliary verb; use 'lots of people use'. 'Someone or government service holder' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'including government employees'. Rewrite to correct subject-verb agreement, word order, and noun choice.

× They use bike because it is very comfortable for journey and it consume our time properly so.

✓ They use bikes because they are very convenient for travel and save time.

Pronoun and number errors: 'They use bike' needs plural 'bikes'. 'It is very comfortable for journey' should be 'they are very convenient for travel'—use appropriate adjective (convenient) and noun (travel). 'It consume our time properly' has subject-verb agreement and awkward phrasing; use 'save time'. Remove redundant 'so'. Suggestion: keep subject and verb consistent in number and choose natural collocations ('convenient for travel', 'save time').