Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a topic sentence (yes/no or brief statement), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural and under five sentences. For example, state whether you had a bike, mention how old you were or how often you used it, and give a short reason or memory.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it for my seventh birthday and used it almost every day to ride to the park. Because my neighborhood was safe and there were few cars, I felt free to explore with my friends.

제안: Again, you repeated the question instead of giving an opinion. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., Yes, they are popular / No, not very popular), then add specific supporting details and a linking word to make your point coherent. Mention who uses bikes, typical places they are used, or trends to make the answer concrete.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For instance, many students and office workers use them for short commutes because traffic is often heavy, and there are now more bike lanes than before.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original reply repeats the examiner's question and does not provide a proper answer. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because the response lacks a verb phrase that affirms or denies ownership. Use past simple to match the question's tense: 'Did you have...' requires 'I had' or 'No, I didn't have.' Provide a full clause (subject + past-tense verb) and optionally add brief details (e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red.') to make the answer natural.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original reply repeats the examiner's question and does not answer it. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because a reply should express opinion rather than echo the question. Maintain present simple tense for habitual or general opinions: use 'I think' + clause. If disagreeing, use 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.' Add brief justification to improve the answer (e.g., 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes.').