Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a full, natural response with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail. Instead of a one-word answer, say whether you had a bike and add a brief detail (when you got it, how often you used it, or a short memory). Use 1–3 linking words if you add extra information and keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I got a small red bike when I was about seven and rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day. Because I lived near a park, I often practiced tricks there with my friends, which helped me improve quickly.

제안: Give a clearer, more specific opinion and support it with reasons or examples. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No/Partly), then add one or two specific reasons or examples (e.g., city infrastructure, cycling culture, weather, safety). Use linking words like "however," "because," or "for example" to make your answer coherent and stay within five sentences.

예시: Partly — bikes are popular in some places but not everywhere. For example, in larger cities many people cycle for short commutes because there are bike lanes and parking, but in rural areas people usually rely on cars because distances are longer and roads are less safe for cyclists.

× Yeah.

✓ Yes.

'Yeah' is informal spoken slang; while not a grammar error per se, for a formal speaking test answer 'Yes' is more appropriate and grammatically standard. Use 'Yes' to give a clear affirmative response.

× Somehow yes, but I don't really think it's that popular.

✓ Somewhat, yes, but I don't really think they are that popular.

The original sentence uses 'that popular' which is acceptable, but the phrase 'Somehow yes' is awkward; 'Somewhat, yes' is a clearer adverbial response. More importantly, the subject 'bikes' is plural, so the pronoun and verb agreement should reflect plural: use 'they are' rather than leaving it implied. Also inserting a comma improves clarity. Suggestion: say 'Somewhat, yes, but I don't really think they are that popular.'