Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Améliorer la grammaire et la structure: utilisez le passé correct et une phrase thème claire. Évitez les erreurs comme l'omission d'auxiliaires et la mauvaise forme des temps. Donnez un détail additionnel pertinent (par exemple, quel type de vélo, qui vous l'a offert, ou un souvenir lié). Utilisez 2–4 phrases au maximum et une conjonction pour relier les idées.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, which my parents bought for me. I used to ride it to the park every afternoon, and I learned to balance without training wheels within a few weeks.

제안: Améliorer la précision lexicale et la fluidité: utilisez le terme correct («bicycles» ou «cycling») et évitez hésitations. Donnez un soutien spécifique (par exemple, reasons why they are popular, who uses them, or how common they are in cities vs. countryside). Reliez les idées avec un mot de liaison pour plus de cohérence.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips and commuting because they are cheap and convenient, especially in smaller cities. Also, cycling clubs and bike-sharing schemes have grown recently, which shows how common cycling has become.

× Yeah, I have a bike when I child.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past tense. The original uses present tense 'have' and omits the auxiliary 'was' for the clause 'when I was a child'. Use simple past 'had' for possession in the past and include the correct past form of the verb 'to be' ('was') for the time clause. Suggestion: Practice forming past-tense statements about past time expressions (e.g., 'when I was a child, I had...'). Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yeah, in my opinion, biker is uh, very popular in my country.

✓ Yeah, in my opinion, biking is, uh, very popular in my country.

The intended meaning is that the activity of riding bikes is popular. The original uses the singular noun 'biker' (a person) which does not fit with 'is very popular' to describe a general trend. Use the gerund/noun 'biking' or the plural 'bikes'/'cyclists' depending on meaning. Here 'biking' (the activity) or 'bikes' (the objects) work. Also maintain present simple for general facts. Suggestion: Choose 'biking is popular' for the activity or 'bikes are popular' for the objects; ensure subject and verb agree (plural subjects take plural verbs). Grammar problem type ID: 1