Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but improve naturalness and grammar: use simple past for past events (“I had a bike” rather than “I've had”), avoid wordy phrasing (“served me to school”), and add a brief linking phrase to organize information. Keep responses concise (max 5 sentences).

예시: I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was in primary school, and I used it to ride to school every day until I started high school. It was very handy and helped me get around independently.

제안: Your response addresses the question but has several problems: unclear phrasing ("a bike is usually a trap a a vehicle"), grammar (plural/singular agreement), filler words ("uh"), and limited supporting detail. Make a clear topic sentence, follow with specific reasons or examples, use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"), and avoid fillers.

예시: Yes, bikes are still very popular in Vietnam. Because traffic is often congested and fuel can be expensive, many people—especially students and young workers—prefer bikes for short trips. For example, I often see students riding to school early in the morning to avoid traffic.

× Yes, I've had a bike since I was a little kid.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a little kid.

The examiner asked about having a bike in the past (Did you have...), so the past simple tense is appropriate rather than present perfect. Use 'I had' to match the question's past time frame. Also, no article error here.

× My parents bought one for me when I was in primary school and it was the main vehicle that served me to school every day till high school.

✓ My parents bought one for me when I was in primary school, and it was the main vehicle that took me to school every day until high school.

Use past simple 'took' rather than 'served me to' which is unnatural and ungrammatical. 'Take someone to school' is the correct verb phrase. Also replace 'till' with 'until' for formality and clarity. A comma before 'and' improves sentence structure.

× Yes, of course, in a country with busy traffic like Vietnam, a bike is usually a trap a a vehicle.

✓ Yes, of course, in a country with busy traffic like Vietnam, a bike is usually a cheap and convenient vehicle.

'Trap a a' is incorrect and likely a transcription error. 'Cheap and convenient' are appropriate adjectives describing bikes in heavy-traffic countries. Use 'a bike is' with correct adjective order and fix duplicated article.

× But many young students and teenager used uh to travel through uh work or school.

✓ But many young students and teenagers used to travel between home and school or to get to work.

Use plural 'teenagers' to match 'many'. Use the construction 'used to' (habit in the past) and 'travel between home and school' or 'get to work' for clarity. 'Through' is incorrect here; 'between' or 'to' fits better. Remove filler 'uh' in corrected sentence.