Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần sửa ngữ pháp, trật tự từ và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn; tránh lỗi thì và số ít/số nhiều; bổ sung liên kết logic và chi tiết cụ thể. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa thì ở câu đầu cho đúng (When I was young), (2) dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán (bought, used), (3) sửa nhân xưng số ít/số nhiều (my friends), (4) giới hạn độ dài (không quá 3–4 câu) và (5) thêm một câu chi tiết ngắn về kỷ niệm để làm phong phú câu trả lời.

예시: Yes, I did. When I was young my parents bought me a pink bicycle. I used it to exercise and to go out with my friends, and I remember riding it every weekend to the park.

제안: Cần sửa từ vựng sai (banks → bikes), đảm bảo sự nhất quán ngữ pháp (plural vs singular), dùng liên từ hợp lý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể. Cụ thể: (1) sửa lỗi từ, (2) bắt đầu với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, (3) dùng linking words như 'also' hoặc 'moreover' đúng vị trí, (4) giới thiệu một lý do cụ thể hoặc ví dụ (ví dụ: nhiều đường dành cho xe đạp, các chương trình thuê xe).

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular. In my country bikes are not only a common means of transport but also a popular way to stay fit. Moreover, many cities have bike lanes and public bike-sharing programs, which makes cycling convenient and eco-friendly.

× When I was trying my parents bought a pink bike for me and I use it to do exercise and hang out with my friend.

✓ When I was trying, my parents bought a pink bike for me and I used it to exercise and hang out with my friends.

The phrase 'When I was trying' is incomplete and likely intended to be 'When I was young' or removed; 'use' should be past tense 'used' to match 'bought' (past context). 'to do exercise' is unnatural; use 'to exercise'. 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match typical usage. Suggestion: replace 'When I was trying' with 'When I was young' or start with 'As a child, my parents bought...' and keep consistent past tense. (Note: explanation provided in English as requested.)

× Yes, because in my country banks are not only a means of transport but it is also a great way for people to keep fit and moreover bikes are eco friendly and easy to use.

✓ Yes, because in my country bikes are not only a means of transport but are also a great way for people to keep fit; moreover, bikes are eco-friendly and easy to use.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference errors: 'banks' is a typo for 'bikes'. The sentence mixed plural subject 'bikes' with singular 'it is'; change to 'are also'. Add hyphen in 'eco-friendly' and plural agreement throughout. Also improve punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: ensure the subject stays consistent (plural 'bikes') and verbs agree ('are').