Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời ngắn gọn nhưng chưa tự nhiên và có vài lỗi nhỏ. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, tránh các thành ngữ mơ hồ như “it is what it is”, cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: ai tặng, loại xe, kỷ niệm) và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Giữ độ dài tối đa 4-5 câu và sửa ngữ pháp nhỏ như thì và từ vựng (ví dụ "that day" → "back then").

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used it every day to visit friends and go to the park. As a result, I learned to be independent and confident on the road.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng thiếu chính xác ngữ pháp và từ vựng (sai chính tả "bite"), cấu trúc lộn xộn và lặp ý. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng từ chính xác (bikes), tránh nói mơ hồ như "according to some researchers I found" nếu không nêu nguồn; thay vào đó nêu ví dụ hoặc số liệu cụ thể nếu có. Sử dụng liên từ (however, although, nowadays) để nối các ý và chỉnh động từ (travel → travel/commute; exercises → exercise). Giữ 3-4 câu với chi tiết cụ thể về xu hướng, lý do và ví dụ.

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, although they are less common than motorbikes. Recently more people have started cycling for short commutes and exercise because of rising health awareness and traffic congestion. For example, many cities now have bike lanes and rental schemes to encourage cycling.

× Well, I did have a bike when I was a child. To be honest it was my only means of transport that day, so it is what it is.

✓ Well, I did have a bike when I was a child. To be honest, it was my only means of transport back then, so it was what it was.

The student mixes past and present tenses. The event refers to childhood (past), so verbs and time expressions should be in the past tense. Replace 'that day' with 'back then' for natural reference to a past period, and change 'is what it is' (present) to 'was what it was' (past) to maintain consistent tense. Also add a comma after 'To be honest' for correct punctuation.

× Well yes, according to some researchers I found. I think bite are popular in my country.

✓ Well yes, according to some researchers I found, I think bikes are popular in my country.

There are two issues: 'bite' is a typo and should be 'bikes' (plural). The noun must agree in number with the plural predicate 'are'. Also add a comma to link the clause smoothly. Ensure correct spelling to avoid grammar misclassification.

× It's not as popular as motorbike, but I think that nowadays more and more people are using bikes to traveling and exercises.

✓ They're not as popular as motorbikes, but I think that nowadays more and more people are using bikes for travel and exercise.

Number agreement: 'motorbike' should be plural 'motorbikes' to match 'bikes' in general comparison. Also pronoun/subject should match: 'They're' or 'Bikes are' to refer to bikes. Additionally, incorrect prepositional uses 'to traveling and exercises' corrected to 'for travel and exercise' (use noun forms after 'for' and uncountable 'exercise'). This keeps tense and meaning consistent.