Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm/nhầm từ; bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng một câu chủ đề nêu rõ có/không, rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết hỗ trợ (ví dụ về ai tặng, bạn sử dụng thế nào). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản nếu cần (for example, because). Hạn chế độ dài tối đa 5 câu.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I rode it almost every day after school. For example, I used to cycle to my friend’s house and around the neighborhood, which helped me feel independent.

제안: Câu trả lời này không trả lời câu hỏi, có lặp từ và lỗi cấu trúc; bạn nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + brief reason), rồi nêu 1–2 chi tiết có dẫn chứng cụ thể (ví dụ: statistics, observations, or reasons). Dùng liên từ như because, however, and therefore để nối ý. Giữ tối đa 5 câu.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities and among students, because they are cheap and convenient. For instance, many people cycle to work or school to avoid traffic, and there are also several bike-sharing schemes in major cities.

× They have a bite when you.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used incorrect pronouns and wrong vocabulary. 'They' is a plural third-person pronoun but the speaker should use 'I'. 'you' at the end is incorrect; the clause should match the examiner's past tense question 'when you were a child' and be first person. 'bite' is a misspelling of 'bike'. Also verb tense must be past: 'had' not 'have'. Suggestion: use the first-person singular pronoun 'I', correct the noun to 'bike', and use the past tense verb 'had' to match the time reference.

× Do you think Do you think bikes are purple in your?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence has repetition and missing words. The student repeated 'Do you think' and used 'purple' which is likely a mis-speech for 'popular'. The phrase 'in your' is incomplete and should be 'in your country'. Also the question should mirror the examiner's original present-tense form. Suggestion: remove repetition, use the correct adjective 'popular', and include the noun 'country' to complete the prepositional phrase.