Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答信息明确但语法和表达不够自然，有重复与小错误。建议： 1) 简化句子并直接回应问题（例如："I'm a recent graduate"）。 2) 修正语法与拼写错误（"myst" 应为 "my tests" 或具体考试名，如 "GRE"/"TOEFL"）。 3) 使用连贯短句并加一两个细节支持（例如报考专业或考试类型）。 练习方法：把一句长句拆成2个简单句并反复朗读，注意冠词与时态。

예시: I'm a recent graduate. I'm applying for postgraduate programs in economics and I'm currently preparing for my entrance exams.

제안: 回答存在时态、词形和词汇错误，且表达不够自然。建议： 1) 使用正确时态与动词形式（"I graduated from..." 而非 "I was graduated"）。 2) 修正专有名词拼写（"Financy" 应为 "Finance"）和短语（"majoring subject" 应为 "major" 或 "my major is"）。 3) 简洁回答并补充一条具体信息（如毕业年份或课程特点）。

예시: I graduated from Dalian University of Finance and Economics. My major was economics, and I focused on macroeconomic theory.

제안: 回答正面且给出理由，但有语法和措辞问题。建议： 1) 使用更自然的表达（例如："The teachers and students are friendly" 而非 "there's teachers"）。 2) 避免重复与多余信息（最后一句冗余）。 3) 增加具体例子支持观点（如校园设施、教学质量或学术资源）。

예시: Yes, it's a great place to study. The teachers and students are very friendly, and the university offers good research resources and small class sizes.

제안: 回答含重复且逻辑不够清晰。建议： 1) 避免口语重复（删去多余的 "I think I think"）。 2) 回答要直接并说明原因或提出具体改进建议（即使不希望改变，也可说出原因）。 3) 句子要语法正确（"I want more people to choose my university"）。

예시: No, I don't think it needs major changes. I'm happy with the academic environment, and I would encourage more students to consider studying there because of its supportive community.

제안: 回答内容明确但语法与流利性欠佳。建议： 1) 使用正确时态（"I graduated this year"），并把信息分成两句表达申请与职业规划。 2) 用更准确的介词和搭配（"application for postgraduate study in economics"）。 3) 给出具体的下一步计划或时间表（如申请国家、目标学校或职业方向）。

예시: I graduated this year and I'm applying for postgraduate study in economics. I'm also planning my career in economic research, and I hope to start working as a research assistant after I finish my master's.

× I'm currently a new graduate this year and I am preparing my postgraduate applications in economics and also I'm preparing myst right now.

✓ I'm a recent graduate this year, and I am preparing my postgraduate applications in economics and also preparing for my MST right now.

句子时态与表达问题：用“currently a new graduate this year”重复时间信息且不自然，应用“recent graduate”更地道；“preparing my postgraduate applications”应为“preparing my postgraduate applications”（保留），而“preparing myst”似为拼写或缩写错误，若指考试应为“preparing for my MST”。建议合并并简化句子，避免重复时间词。

× I was graduated from Dalian University of Financy and Economics.

✓ I graduated from Dalian University of Finance and Economics.

“was graduated”是不正确的被动用法，毕业通常用主动语态“graduate”作过去式：I graduated from ...；另外学校名称拼写错误“Financy”应为“Finance”。中文建议：使用主动过去式“graduated from”，并注意专有名词拼写。

× So my majoring subject is economics.

✓ So my major is economics.

“majoring subject”是不自然的搭配，应使用名词短语“my major”来表达“我的专业”。建议用更简洁的表达：“my major is economics”。

× I think this school is a very nice place to study because there's teachers and classmates are very friendly to everyone.

✓ I think this school is a very nice place to study because the teachers and classmates are very friendly to everyone.

原句“There's teachers and classmates”中使用了“There is”与复数主语不一致（There be问题/单复数搭配），应使用“the teachers and classmates are”。同时要加定冠词“the”更自然。中文建议：复数主语时不要使用“there's”，而用合适的主语和动词。

× And the economics is the majoring subject on this course.

✓ And economics is the major for this course.

“the economics”不需要定冠词，且“majoring subject on this course”不自然，改为“major for this course”或“the major of this program”。中文建议：学科名前一般不用“the”，并用“major for/of”表达专业所属。

× No, I think I think the school is very nice to study right now. So I want to more people to choose my university for the future studying life.

✓ No, I think the school is very good right now, so I want more people to choose my university for their future studies.

句子结构混乱：重复“I think I think”，并且“nice to study right now”表达啰嗦，改为“the school is very good right now”。“I want to more people to choose”语序错误，应为“I want more people to choose my university”，且“for the future studying life”不地道，改为“for their future studies”。中文建议：去掉重复词，调整语序并用地道表达“未来的学习”。

× Oh, I currently graduated from this year so I am preparing my postgraduate application on an economics and I'm planning my career

✓ Oh, I graduated this year, so I am preparing my postgraduate applications in economics and planning my career.

“currently graduated from this year”时态和副词使用不当，毕业是过去事件应用过去式“graduated this year”。“postgraduate application on an economics”介词和冠词错误，应为“applications in economics”。最后句子缺少连贯性和标点，改为并列结构。中文建议：用过去式表达已发生的毕业事件，注意介词和冠词用法，并使句子结构完整。