Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答总体清晰且信息具体，但可更自然与简洁。建议：1) 开头直接用简短主题句（例如“I work as a junior lawyer.”），避免冗长；2) 用一两个并列短句补充职责，使用连接词如“and”或“mainly”使结构更流畅；3) 可加入时间频率词（e.g. “mostly”）或具体例子以增加细节。

예시: I work as a junior lawyer at a law firm in Sichuan. I mainly handle commercial cases and also assist senior lawyers with legal research, such as preparing case summaries and drafting contracts.

제안: 回答直接且信息完整，但可更自然地把两句合并并使用连接词。建议：1) 用现在或过去时的自然衔接（如“I graduated two years ago from…”）；2) 合并专业信息为一句以避免断裂；3) 如能补充一项具体课程或经历会更有说服力。

예시: I graduated two years ago from Southeast University of Political Science and Law, where I studied law with a focus on civil and commercial law, including courses like contract law and corporate litigation.

제안: 回答结构良好、逻辑清晰，但可以更简洁并使用连词使表达更自然。建议：1) 将“Firstly… secondly…”换成更口语化的连接词如“Firstly”改为“Firstly/For one”并适当缩短；2) 可以加入个人感受或具体例子（如“library’s long opening hours”）来加强说服力。

예시: Yes. For one, it’s one of the top law schools in China with a strong academic reputation. Also, the campus is very peaceful and the libraries are quiet and well-equipped, which really helped me concentrate on my studies.

제안: 回答意思明确但语法和用词有明显错误，显得不够自然。建议：1) 修正语法错误，避免重复（如“I've started in”错误）；2) 直接用简洁句表达观点，如“No, I wouldn't change anything.”；3) 若想显得更自然可给出一两点小改进作为让步，显示更流畅的交流。

예시: No, I wouldn't change anything. I found the teaching quality and study facilities excellent, so the experience was already very satisfying.

제안: 回答内容明确且具体，但有小语法问题与冗余。建议：1) 改正“starting for required exams”之类的错误为“starting with”; 2) 将句子拆成两句提高清晰度；3) 可加入计划的时间表或目标国家以提供更多细节。

예시: I'm planning to apply for a postgraduate program overseas. I'll probably resign from my job soon and spend the next few months preparing—starting with the required exams and drafting my personal statement, aiming to enroll next year.

× Right now I'm working as a junior lawyer at a law firm in Sichuan province, where I usually handle commercial cases and assist senior lawyers with some legal research.

✓ Right now I am working as a junior lawyer at a law firm in Sichuan Province, where I usually handle commercial cases and assist senior lawyers with legal research.

问题类型：现在时态与习惯用法。说明：句子中“I'm”缩写虽无误，但在正式书面语中建议使用完整形式“I am”；此外“some legal research”中的“some”在此处不是必要，省略后更自然。建议：在正式陈述中用完整时态形式，遇到不可数名词或泛指职业活动时可省略不必要的限定词。

× I studied law at Southeast University of Political Science and Law in China and graduated 2 years ago.

✓ I studied law at Southeast University of Political Science and Law in China and graduated two years ago.

问题类型：过去时态和数字写法。说明：句子时态使用正确（过去时），但“2 years ago”在正式书面表达中建议写作“two years ago”。建议：口语中可用数字，书面及正式场合用拼写数字。

× The program specialized in civil and commercial law.

✓ The program specialized in civil and commercial law.

问题类型：现在时态/过去时态一致性检查。说明：如果指的是过去完成的课程内容，使用“specialized”正确；若在描述课程性质的通用事实，应使用现在时“specializes”。原句上下文为已毕业，过去时匹配，因此无需改动。此处仅作为说明。

× Yes, of course. Firstly, the university is ranked among the top Chinese law schools, so it has a strong academic reputation, and secondly, the campus is very tranquil and the library areas are quiet, which helps me stay focused when I'm studying.

✓ Yes, of course. Firstly, the university is ranked among the top Chinese law schools, so it has a strong academic reputation. Secondly, the campus is very tranquil and the library is quiet, which helps me stay focused when I study.

问题类型：冠词和句子结构问题。说明：原句过长且有复合连词冗余，使用两个并列分句时用句号分开更清晰；“library areas are quiet”改为“the library is quiet”更自然；“when I'm studying”改为“when I study”在一般事实陈述中更合适。建议：避免冗长复合句，注意冠词和名词单复数搭配，用一般现在时描述经常性动作。

× Actually the place I start I've started in is quite perfect, so from my perspective there is no change needed to this place.

✓ Actually, the place where I started is quite perfect, so from my perspective no changes are needed.

问题类型：句子结构错误。说明：原句“the place I start I've started in”结构混乱且重复，应改为“the place where I started”；“no change needed to this place”措辞不自然，改为“no changes are needed”更地道。建议：避免重复表达，使用正确的定语从句连接词，注意主谓一致和复数形式（changes）。

× Now I'm planning to apply for a postgraduate program overseas, so I'll probably resign from my current job soon and spend the next few months preparing for my application, starting for required exams and writing a personal statement.

✓ Now I am planning to apply for a postgraduate program overseas, so I'll probably resign from my current job soon and spend the next few months preparing my application, starting with the required exams and writing a personal statement.

问题类型：将来时与动词搭配错误。说明：原句“starting for required exams”用法错误，正确搭配为“start with the required exams”或“begin by taking the required exams”；另外“preparing for my application”可更自然地表达为“preparing my application”。建议：注意动词短语搭配（start with / begin by + 名词/动名词），并保持代词所有格一致。