Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be slightly more natural and specific. Start with a direct topic sentence and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repeating obvious information and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: I’m currently a senior high school student. I’m studying science and preparing for university entrance exams, so I spend most of my time on classes and revision.

제안: Give a clearer, more informative answer instead of repeating the phrase "Senior High School." Mention the school name or type and add one detail about the environment using a linking word for coherence.

예시: I study at Riverside International High School, which is a bilingual school. The classes are small, so I get a lot of individual attention from teachers.

제안: Be more natural and grammatically accurate: correct article use and add a reason to support your opinion with a linking word like "because" or "since." Keep it concise.

예시: Yes, it’s an international school, and I enjoy studying there because the teachers are supportive and the lessons are interactive.

제안: This answer is unclear and does not address the question. Respond directly about changes you would like at the school, and if you don’t want changes, say so and give a brief reason using a linking word such as "because" or "so."

예시: I wouldn’t change much about the school because the facilities are good, but I would like longer library hours so students can study after extracurricular activities.

제안: Make the sentence structure natural and fluent. Begin with a clear topic sentence and add one specific detail such as the country or field of study using a linking word like "and" or "so."

예시: I plan to study abroad for university, probably in Australia, and I want to major in engineering because they have strong programs and good research opportunities.

× I am a student in Senior High School.

✓ I am a senior high school student.

The original sentence is understandable but the word order is unnatural. Use the noun phrase 'senior high school student' where the level functions as an adjective before 'student'. Also 'Senior High School' as a proper name is possible, but in conversation 'senior high school student' is more natural.

× I study in Senior High School.

✓ I study at a senior high school.

Preposition use and noun form: use 'at' with institutions and use lowercase common noun phrase 'senior high school' unless naming a specific school. The verb 'study' in present tense is correct, but the preposition should be 'at' to indicate location of study.

× Yes, it is a International School and I enjoy studying there.

✓ Yes, it is an international school and I enjoy studying there.

Article error: 'a' before a vowel sound should be 'an'. Also 'International School' should be lowercase as a common noun unless it is the official name. Use 'an international school'.

× I think I just changed myself.

✓ I think I wouldn't change anything about it./I think I would not change anything about the school.

The original answer doesn't respond to the question 'Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?'. 'I just changed myself' is unclear and uses past tense awkwardly. A better reply expresses desire about changes to the school: use conditional 'would not change' or 'would change' and specify 'the school' to make the sentence relevant.

× My future study plans, I think it will be study abroad. In university in other country.

✓ My future study plan is to study abroad at a university in another country.

Multiple problems: sentence structure and tense. Use 'study plan is to' plus the infinitive 'to study abroad'. 'It will be study abroad' is incorrect form. Use 'at a university' with article 'a' and 'another country' instead of 'other country'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'plan is'.