Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 句子較清楚但有語法與用詞不當（如“final years”、“prepared for my census”），信息有點混亂。建議：1) 句首直接回應考官（如“I’m a university student majoring in environmental science.”）；2) 修正表達不準確的地方，用“final year”與“preparing for my finals”或“graduation”替換；3) 保持語句簡潔，不超過五句；4) 使用連接詞如“and”或“so”使內容連貫。

예시: I’m a university student majoring in environmental science. From this September I’ll be in my final year, and I’m busy preparing for my thesis and final exams.

제안: 回答具體且信息豐富，但存在語法與表達細節問題（如“in the Beijing University of Technology”，“well kept ground”）。建議：1) 使用正確介詞與校名表達（“at Beijing University of Technology”）；2) 用更自然的短語描述校園（如“well-kept grounds”、“a small lake”）；3) 用一兩句補充具體細節以顯示個人感受；4) 使用連接詞如“and”或“which makes it”保持流暢。

예시: I study at Beijing University of Technology, which is right in the city center. The campus is lovely with well-kept grounds and a small lake, and I enjoy studying there because it’s peaceful and convenient.

제안: 回答有肯定，但語法錯誤顯著（如“an huge”，“students can reading”，“supply student do”），結構冗長且有些不自然。建議：1) 開頭直接說明立場；2) 修正冠詞與動詞形式（“a huge library where students can read and study”）；3) 用更地道表達描述設備（“a variety of advanced laboratories and equipment for experiments”）；4) 用連接詞如“and”或“also”使句子更流暢。

예시: Yes, it’s an excellent place to study. There’s a huge library where students can read and study quietly, and there are advanced laboratories and equipment for practical experiments.

제안: 回答具體且有原因，但存在語法錯誤（如“every student have”，“it's often get stuck”，“so this caused”）及冗長。建議：1) 句首直接回答願望（如“I would like the school to upgrade the Wi‑Fi”）；2) 修正動詞一致與被動/主動語態（“it often gets stuck, which causes delays and frustration”）；3) 簡潔描述具體情況並加上期望結果；4) 使用連接詞“because”或“which”連接原因與結果。

예시: I would like the school to upgrade the Wi‑Fi. During the start of term the system often gets stuck when students try to register for classes, which causes delays and a lot of frustration.

제안: 回答能表達意思但語法與用詞不準確（如“the last year”，“the last years we don't have more classes”），句子重複且略顯笨拙。建議：1) 直接說明計劃（如“In my final year I’ll focus on experiments and my thesis”）；2) 修正數量詞與時態（“final year”，“we won’t have many classes”）；3) 補充具體時間安排或目標以增加內容深度；4) 用連接詞如“so”或“and”來銜接細節。

예시: In my final year I’ll mainly focus on conducting experiments and preparing my thesis, so I don’t have many regular classes and can concentrate on research.

× I'm a student majoring in environmental science. Actually, after this September I will enter my final years at university, so I'm prepared for my census.

✓ I'm a student majoring in environmental science. Actually, after this September I will enter my final year at university, so I'm preparing for my exams.

句中“final years”与语境不符，应为单数“final year”（最后一年）。另外“prepared for my census”用词错误，应为“preparing for my exams”（准备考试）。时态方面使用将来时“will enter”是可以的，但第二部分应使用现在进行式或现在完成进行表示准备中的动作。建议将“will enter my final year”与“I'm preparing for my exams”搭配使用。

× I study in the Beijing University of Technology which is located in the center of Beijing and our campus is very beautiful with well kept ground and a small lake.

✓ I study at Beijing University of Technology, which is located in the center of Beijing, and our campus is very beautiful with well-kept grounds and a small lake.

地点动词应使用介词“at”而不是“in”。“Beijing University of Technology”前通常不加定冠词“the”。“well kept ground”需用复数“grounds”并且复合形容词用连字符“well-kept”。句中缺少必要的逗号以分隔定语从句。建议注意介词用法和名词单复数及形容词连写。

× I enjoy studying there because it's peaceful and convenient.

✓ I enjoy studying there because it's peaceful and convenient.

该句语法正确，无需修改。这里的第三人称单数“it's”使用正确。仅作确认。

× Yes, of course there are not only an huge library which students can reading and arrange their studying assessments, but also a variety of advanced equipment which can supply student do some experiments.

✓ Yes, of course there is not only a huge library where students can read and arrange their study schedules, but also a variety of advanced equipment that can help students do experiments.

多个错误："there are not only an huge library" 中“an”与以辅音音素开头的“huge”不匹配，应为“a huge library”。结构“there is not only ... but also ...”主语是单数“a huge library”，因此谓语用“is”。“which students can reading”动词形式错误，应为“不定式或原形/动名词”，此处改为“where students can read”。“arrange their studying assessments”表达不自然，改为“arrange their study schedules”。“a variety of advanced equipment which can supply student do some experiments”中“equipment”不可数，且“supply student do”不正确，改为“that can help students do experiments”。建议注意冠词、主谓一致、动词形式、不可数名词及更地道的表达。

× Actually, I hope our school's Internet can be upgraded because when the new term begins every student have to choose classes on the Internet, but it's often get stuck so this caused delays and frustration.

✓ Actually, I hope our school's Internet can be upgraded because when the new term begins every student has to choose classes online, but it often gets stuck, so this causes delays and frustration.

时态与主谓一致问题："every student have"应为第三人称单数“has”。"it's often get stuck"动词形式错误，应为“it often gets stuck”。“this caused”时态不一致，应为“一般现在时”与前句保持一致，改为“this causes”。另外“on the Internet”更常用“online”。建议注意every后动词单数、被动/主动形式及时态一致。

× To be honest, I only have the last year at the university after this September and the last years we don't have more classes. We just need to do some experiments and prepare for our thesis.

✓ To be honest, I will only have my last year at the university after this September, and in my final year we don't have many classes. We just need to do some experiments and prepare for our thesis.

时态与数一致问题：原句“I only have the last year... after this September”时态和表达不自然，改为将来时“I will only have my last year...”更清晰。"the last years we don't have more classes"不合语法，且“years”应为单数“year”，并且“don't have more classes”改为“don't have many classes”更自然。整体需保证时态一致并使用正确的名词单复数形式。建议使用“my final year”及保持将来时与现在时的正确搭配。