Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence variety. Use correct verb forms (e.g., "I'm in my final year", "I chose finance", "I want a career in..."). Keep answers concise and natural (max 4–5 sentences). Add a short linking phrase to connect reasons, for example "because" or "so".

예시: I'm a final-year finance student at the Azerbaijan State University of Economics. I chose finance because I'm fascinated by how markets operate and I enjoy analyzing data. As a result, I hope to build a career in financial analysis after graduation.

제안: This is a clear, direct answer. You could expand slightly with one brief supporting detail using a linking phrase (e.g., "which is..." or "where...") to make the response more informative while remaining concise.

예시: I study at the Azerbaijan State University of Economics, which has a strong business faculty and good links with local companies.

제안: Use more natural phrasing and provide a specific reason or example. Replace awkward expressions like "I definitely can say" and "greater opportunity to get a high salary job" with smoother alternatives: "I believe so" and explain why (e.g., strong career services, internships).

예시: Yes, I think it's a great place to study because the university offers strong career services and internship programs that help students secure well-paid jobs after graduation.

제안: Good content with specific details. Improve grammar and concision: correct plural/singular agreement and use linking words clearly. Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid redundancy ("modern design" and "up-to-date facilities" overlap).

예시: No, I wouldn't. The university was recently renovated and now has modern, up-to-date facilities and improved study spaces that make it easier to concentrate and collaborate with classmates.

제안: Fix grammar ("pursue a career", "big four companies"). Be slightly more specific about steps you will take (e.g., internships, postgraduate study) and use linking words like "so" or "therefore" to show motivation. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I plan to pursue a career in finance, ideally as a financial analyst or in corporate finance. To achieve this, I'm aiming to secure internships during my final year and hopefully join one of the Big Four companies because they offer strong training programs and excellent long-term opportunities.

× Currently I am a student majoring in finance at the University of Economics.

✓ Currently I am a student majoring in finance at the Azerbaijan State University of Economics.

The original sentence is grammatically correct but inconsistent with the later mention of the university name; include the full university name for clarity and consistency. Suggestion: keep institution names consistent across answers.

× I'm on my final year and I choose finance because I'm interested in how markets work and I want to career in financial analysis.

✓ I'm in my final year and I chose finance because I'm interested in how markets work and I want to pursue a career in financial analysis.

Errors: 'on my final year' should be 'in my final year' (preposition error, ID 11); 'choose' should be past tense 'chose' (past tense issue, ID 5) because choice happened earlier; 'want to career' is incorrect verb usage — needs 'pursue a career' (verb + noun correction, maps to verb form issues ID 8/9). Suggestions: use correct prepositions ('in' for year), match tense to when the action occurred, and use correct verb collocations ('pursue a career').

× Yes, I definitely can say that my university provides greater opportunity to get a high salary job in the future.

✓ Yes, I can definitely say that my university provides greater opportunities to get high-salary jobs in the future.

Errors: 'greater opportunity' should be plural 'greater opportunities' (singular/plural issue, ID 1); 'a high salary job' is awkward—use 'high-salary jobs' or 'a high-salary job' with matching singular/plural. Also word order: 'definitely can say' is acceptable but more natural as 'can definitely say'. Suggestions: ensure noun number agreement and use hyphen for compound adjective 'high-salary' when before a noun.

× No, I don't think so because my university was recently renovated and now it has more modern design with up to date facilities and better study spaces that makes it easier to concentrate and collaborate with classmates.

✓ No, I don't think so, because my university was recently renovated and now it has a more modern design with up-to-date facilities and better study spaces that make it easier to concentrate and collaborate with classmates.

Errors: missing comma before 'because' for clarity (punctuation not in list but keep); 'more modern design' needs an article 'a' (article error, ID 22); 'up to date' should be hyphenated 'up-to-date' as a compound adjective (adjective use, ID 13); 'study spaces that makes' has subject-verb agreement error—'spaces' (plural) requires 'make' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Suggestions: add articles where needed, hyphenate compound adjectives before nouns, and ensure verb agrees with plural subjects.

× I plan to pursue career in finance, ideally as a financial analyst or in corporate finance.

✓ I plan to pursue a career in finance, ideally as a financial analyst or in corporate finance.

Error: missing article 'a' before 'career' (article error, ID 22). Suggestion: include the indefinite article with singular countable nouns: 'pursue a career'.

× I'm hoping to join one of the big four company because they offer strong training programs and provide better job opportunities.

✓ I'm hoping to join one of the Big Four companies because they offer strong training programs and provide better job opportunities.

Errors: 'big four company' should be plural 'Big Four companies' because 'one of the' requires a plural noun (singular/plural issue, ID 1); 'Big Four' is a proper noun phrase and should be capitalized. Suggestion: use plural noun after 'one of the' and capitalize established names; ensure consistency in number agreement.