Study— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Сформулируйте прямой тематический ответ в начале и избегайте грамматических ошибок и лишних фраз. Упростите и уточните высказывание (например, «I love studying» вместо «I love study»), исправьте артикли и порядок слов, и не повторяйте информацию. Используйте 2–3 коротких предложения с конкретными деталями и связкой (for example, because/so).

예시: I'm a student, and I really enjoy studying. I like my school because it has a new building and excellent teachers, so I feel comfortable learning there.

제안: Начните с чёткой топик-фразы и используйте связку для добавления деталей. Исправьте структуру «my school is located in the city centre» вместо «is found in city center», и сократите разговорные вставки («so it's so comfortable»). Дайте одну конкретную деталь и одно связанное следствие.

예시: I study at a school in the city centre, next to a large shopping mall. Because it's nearby, I can often stop at the mall after my lessons finish.

제안: Дайте прямой ответ, затем приведите 1–2 конкретных причины без избыточных повторов. Избегайте неуместных слов («confident») и повторений («very very»). Исправьте артикли и согласование («has good teachers»), используйте связки (because/also) для логики.

예시: Yes, it's a good place to study because the facilities are modern and the teachers are very supportive. Also, my classmates are hardworking, which creates a positive learning environment.

제안: Отвечайте прямо и объясняйте конкретно, какие изменения вы хотите видеть. Исправьте грамматику («our school to organize more events»), используйте связку «because» и дайте пример типа мероприятия, чтобы сделать ответ более содержательным и полезным.

예시: Yes, I would like our school to organize more events because we rarely have them. For example, I would enjoy cultural festivals or science fairs where students can showcase projects.

제안: Дайте чёткое заявление о планах и добавьте одну конкретную причину и возможный шаг. Уберите повторения («in in the USA») и избегайте общих фраз; вместо этого назовите причину (quality of education, specific field) и возможное действие (apply, prepare tests).

예시: I plan to study abroad, preferably in the USA, because many universities there offer strong programs in my field. To achieve this, I intend to prepare for the required exams and research suitable universities next year.

× I'm a student and I really love study.

✓ I'm a student and I really love studying.

The verb 'love' should be followed by a gerund when referring to activities: 'love studying'. Use 'studying' instead of the base form 'study' to create a correct verb + -ing structure (see ID 8).建议: practice pairing verbs of preference (like, love, enjoy) with gerunds.

× I love my school 'cause it has new building and also it has good teachers and yeah, my classmates are good.

✓ I love my school because it has a new building, good teachers, and nice classmates.

Countable singular nouns require an article: 'a new building'. Also use parallel structure and commas between items. Replace informal 'cause' with 'because' and 'yeah' with appropriate connector.建议: remember singular countable nouns need 'a' or 'the'.

× So I glad to be in school in this school.

✓ So I'm glad to be at this school.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' and repeats 'school'. Correct subject-verb contraction 'I'm' and use preposition 'at' with 'school' and 'this school' rather than 'in school in this school'.建议: ensure every sentence has a clear subject and verb and avoid repetition.

× I study in school and my school is found in city center next to the mall so it's so comfortable I can go to this mall after my lessons finish.

✓ I study at a school that is in the city center next to the mall, so it is very convenient; I can go to the mall after my lessons finish.

Use 'at' for attending a school and 'in the city center' requires the article 'the'. 'Found' is incorrect here — use 'is located'. Replace 'so comfortable' with 'convenient' for location. Suggest using commas or semicolons to separate clauses.建议: use 'at' for institutions and include articles for specific places.

× Yes, how I said earlier, my school has new buildings and it has a good teachers and students are good.

✓ Yes, as I said earlier, my school has new buildings, good teachers, and good students.

Use 'as I said' not 'how I said'. 'A good teachers' is incorrect because 'teachers' is plural and should not take 'a'. Keep parallel structure in lists.建议: ensure articles match noun number and maintain parallel phrasing.

× So yeah it is good place to study.

✓ So, yes, it is a good place to study.

'Good place' is a singular countable noun and requires the article 'a'. Also add commas for clarity.建议: include 'a' before singular countable nouns.

× I think in my opinion, my school is very very confident and cool.

✓ I think, in my opinion, my school is very cool and impressive.

'Confident' describes people, not schools. Use 'impressive' or 'well-regarded' for schools. Also avoid redundancy 'I think, in my opinion'—choose one.建议: select adjectives that correctly describe the subject and avoid repeating the same idea.

× Yes, I would like our school make a different events because we have so little them and I really want to go to different events.

✓ Yes, I would like our school to organize different events because we have very few of them, and I really want to attend different events.

After 'would like' use the infinitive 'to organize'. 'Different events' is fine, but 'we have so little them' is ungrammatical — use 'very few of them' for countable nouns. Use 'attend' instead of 'go to' for events.建议: follow 'would like' with 'to' + verb, and use 'few' with countable nouns.

× I really want to study abroad when I grow up in the future.

✓ I really want to study abroad when I grow up.

'When I grow up' already indicates future time; adding 'in the future' is redundant. The structure is present tense for future time clauses.建议: avoid redundancy by using one future time marker.

× I want to live in in the USA and it has really good universities and I see my future there.

✓ I want to live in the USA because it has really good universities, and I see my future there.

Remove duplicated preposition 'in in'. Add 'because' to explain reason and use commas to join clauses. 'The USA' requires the definite article 'the'.建议: be careful with repeated words and include 'the' for country names like 'the USA'.